Player Comments on kool game dater
Wow this person MUST be a total beatch!
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quadcam
on 4/11/2007 6:54:37 AM with a score of 0
Some things to put in:
1: More description
2: More and logical choices
3: More and logical outcomes
4: Passable spelling and grammar
5: An original idea
6: Descriptive, Continuous, prose (This means not leaving gaps between events, and being more descriptive)
7: Emotion
8: DO NOT CALL a game "cool", "awesome" or anything like that. It is bad luck and a sign of incompetence.
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Rommel
on 3/29/2007 5:19:30 AM with a score of 0
THIS IS RETAR--*ahem* Oh, excuse me. After reading the large font, it makes me yell everything. Anyway, not only was this grammar so ridiculous, it started burning my eyes, but the game itself was short, linear, and stupid. Oh, did I say linear? THERE'S NO WAY TO WIN, unless making your ex hate you and run away. No effort whatsoever, and I think you planned for it. I would say nice try, but it ain't a nice try.
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Anubis
on 3/25/2007 5:06:11 PM with a score of 0
she got out a shot gun and Bang! Bang! i'm died? Put a little bit of effort into this.
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DarthVader_13
on 2/27/2007 11:09:08 PM with a score of 0
She said she never wanted to see me again--is that supposed to be a bad thing, since if I choose basically anything else she ends up shooting me?
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Sir_Lancegalawain
on 1/17/2007 4:51:09 PM with a score of 0
I'm running out of bad story comments.
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PrinceOProvidence
on 1/6/2007 12:36:24 PM with a score of 0
This game... well... work on it.
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primates_II
on 12/9/2006 1:49:55 PM with a score of 0
How come this is in love and dating? It's just stupid and has no sense of romance at all.
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October
on 10/31/2006 2:03:38 AM with a score of 0
why is it all bright red and shouting letters?
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Sethaniel
on 10/12/2006 11:28:56 PM with a score of 0
at least I lived
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primates
on 9/1/2006 5:51:02 PM with a score of 0
Terrible grammar and spelling. No plot or description of the characters. Horrible. My only suggestion is to delete the story.
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madglee
on 8/18/2006 12:46:44 AM with a score of 0
I like the way you used big red letters. Good innovation but the story is way to short.
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— on 6/26/2006 10:42:35 PM with a score of 0
okay that was good in the begginging but then it just got stupid.
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— laffytaffykitty on 1/1/2006 5:55:15 PM with a score of 0
Yup. It's stinky. Add some lemon. It might smell better. As for the content, it's bad. Things to consider:
Better grammar
Better Brain.
Either would work, but you should go for both.
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— on 12/9/2005 7:07:14 PM with a score of 0
do i really need to comment on this. guys, it's HORRIBLE.
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— march5th00 on 12/8/2005 10:50:40 PM with a score of 0
LOL great game but too linear. plus kinda stupid but still ok
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— da Ravemaster on 11/20/2005 7:28:21 PM with a score of 0
no much adventure here. thats what we are about here. try playing some other games on the site and get used to the length and stories on here. put more than 3 hours into a game. some have taken 6 months to make.
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— nate on 11/16/2005 12:42:51 PM with a score of 0
now now... is this a first story??? We'll just need more story next time.
march
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— march5th00 on 11/16/2005 12:52:38 AM with a score of 0
That sucked. If that relationship happened to you, wait. Nobody is nice enough to be girlfriend with an X after just seeing them.
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— Havacoman on 11/15/2005 9:13:14 PM with a score of 0
it was a bad game
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— canucks on 11/15/2005 8:46:55 PM with a score of 0
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, just AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, HAMSTERS, AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, oh and this game sucks.
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— JJJ on 11/15/2005 8:24:06 PM with a score of 0
Umm, it wasn't enjoyable...at all. I would rather play a sim game.
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— leon101 on 11/15/2005 7:45:01 PM with a score of 0
very very very kool
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— daniel on 11/15/2005 5:12:33 PM with a score of 0
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