Player Comments on Leroy and Mika's Organic Poetry

Ugh, I do not look forward to reading the love and dating genre as a whole. Well written.

This was a swell game and I enjoyed every second.

I enjoyed it. It was short and sweet.

Original, clever, and beautiful. Well done!

Awh! That was so fucking wholesome, I could die! <3

a gut wrenching aesop on how liberalism and modern society leads to alienation and the demise of familiar bonds

Thoroughly enjoy it, it's like a gentle aroma of a Citrusy Mock Orange but a bit too cheesy. The lais part could have been better if you give them clearer interactions like one read it to the other then the other share their own little lais to their partner in return for their partner gift. It isn't that bad of a short story but it'll be more pleasant if you give the characters to have more certain feelings to eachother so that the lais could have a greater impact to each characters. I would said the relationship between Leroy and Mika feel more like "Neutral Cheesy" rather than the "Romance" that I am looking for. In conclusion, it is a decent read and it could definitely improve more. 5/8

Great design and good use of 1,000 words. So in structure and poem flow, I give you a 7. However, the story plot itself is a childish plane boring soap story with two characters that look like a retarded Dick & Jane know Captain Planet. So I give it a five. Well done, far far better than mine