Player Comments on Let's Take A Quiz!

It was fun

— lebogang on 11/2/2013 11:27:24 AM with a score of 0

— lebogang on 11/2/2013 11:26:40 AM with a score of 0

— lebob on 11/2/2013 11:26:33 AM with a score of 0

Malo

— RobustSporadic on 6/23/2012 12:50:38 AM with a score of 0

Not worthy of being used for toilet paper. AND it's not finished.

— NeverMind on 1/22/2012 11:54:42 PM with a score of 0

I'm sorry but the plot made no sense.

— KaNugget on 1/7/2012 2:26:00 PM with a score of 0

Actually quite creative

— BerkaZerka on 12/24/2011 9:03:21 PM with a score of 0

I agree with bucket... YOU SUCK

— playa988 on 12/22/2011 6:37:17 PM with a score of 0

says the dude who hasn't even PUBLISHED a stoorygame yet. and if you want something violent then make one yourself!

— SEULaw on 10/2/2011 7:27:59 AM with a score of 0

Oh, here's your suggestion to make your next story better: Shove a knife through your throat, swallow a glass of cyanide, and shoot a bullet down your spine.

Then I might give it a 2.

— bucket on 9/24/2011 11:53:53 AM with a score of 0

This should be deleted. My mouse double-clicked and hit 4, when it really deserves less than a one.

— bucket on 9/24/2011 11:51:57 AM with a score of 0

you gotta work on your grammar spelling, work on character description, and a storyline. It was good for a first try, but if you work at it you will make a great story.

— Killer999 on 9/9/2011 9:47:00 AM with a score of 0

It was kind of hard to read.
Maybe you could ask someone to proof-read your stories before you post them from now on.
I didn't rate because this is your first story & I'm sure you'll probably do some editing on this & post it again. If that happens then I'd be happy to comment on the actual story of the game itself.
Good luck...

— windupgirl on 9/1/2011 10:16:43 AM with a score of 0

-bad grammar
-text speak (don't do it - this is a writing website and we want you to get better at writing and NOT use it)
-unexplained plot
-pretty random
-newly introduced characters without any intro . . .

In other words, PLEASE redo this, make it longer, and let somebody test it out and correct it for you. Get feedback BEFORE publishing it!

— fergie14233 on 8/29/2011 9:00:32 PM with a score of 0

I gave you a good rating, 'cause you`re my friend. But the text talk is a little bit aggravating. You also missed out on some punctuation, but you know me! So, I gave you an 8 and all, just to get your ratings up, but you need to really up the quality. More creativity, and productivity! Shalini, I know you. You are in an advanced reading class! You can do better. Anyway, what tapioca?

— SJEKidd on 8/29/2011 1:31:10 AM with a score of 0

Text speak is an auto 1 rating from me.

— FaceDown on 8/27/2011 1:47:49 AM with a score of 0

yeah... no

— ThisisBo on 8/26/2011 9:12:24 PM with a score of 0

Don't use textspeak - it's annoying.
Don't leave loose ends.
Make it a lot longer.
Make a story that makes sense.

— Evagirl on 8/23/2011 5:49:41 AM with a score of 0

SHALINI! You COPYCAT! Oh well. This game was wierd. Ok. Fine. Whatever, but you still copied me!!!

— SJEKidd on 8/22/2011 9:35:32 PM with a score of 0

yeah sorry for fake words but i've been texting so i'm use to text talk. also that's y i only did one question so i could figure out if anyone would like it. and i will add more questions make it edutainment

— SEULaw on 8/22/2011 4:24:38 PM with a score of 0

- Use real words
- Make the quiz longer than one question
- I learned nothing, so this isn't edutainment

— Killa_Robot on 8/22/2011 3:28:44 PM with a score of 0