Player Comments on loveless > ChooseYourStory.com

'u love someone what will u do?'

(obviously, kill her and start a group of mafia and kill people who don't vote for Donald Trump and is an Asian who loves Hitler... Then go back to your normal life to get a girl from a bar and confess to her saying 'eye luv u mary moi!1!1!!')

No seriously, this slowly kills me inside.

— mj113 on 4/22/2016 1:28:06 AM with a score of 0

Wow.
Just...
Just wow.
Don't even bother playing this game..
It's only...
Just WOW.

— Shadowgirl_101 on 4/21/2016 8:43:13 PM with a score of 0

"u confess to her. the end."
I... I don't even... *facepalm*

— Shadowulf on 4/20/2016 10:21:20 AM with a score of 0

All I'm going to say is PROOFREAD.

— mattstat716 on 4/18/2016 8:38:07 AM with a score of 0

this was horrible! Should leave the girl!!

— lisa on 4/18/2016 6:34:21 AM with a score of 0

this is a very weird stoy that's 5 lines long if u ant to add entertainment watch me on bgt.

— samantha on 4/18/2016 6:33:56 AM with a score of 0

Wow I confessed I love her OMG

— bren on 4/18/2016 2:28:20 AM with a score of 0

You have told me everything I ever wondered about the timeless and beautiful intricacies and mystery of love... you have educated me in a way that Shakespeare, Keats and Fifty Shades of Grey never could... incidentally u should be spelt you. It's not that hard: Y-O-U. Remember this advice and after this story is deleted your next story might show some improvement. To see other ways you could improve your writing style I suggest consulting the Help&Info Articles on here starting from the top and going through each one to the bottom because almost everything could be improved in that "story" :)

— Will11 on 4/17/2016 10:39:49 PM with a score of 0

How is this even "advanced editor" anyway?

— MarioRacer010 on 4/17/2016 10:18:23 PM with a score of 0

I don't even know where to begin. Uninteresting, nothing to it, mind-numbingly simple. I would say it's dull ,but it was too short to be dull, and there's nothing to it. I'm having more fun writing ths out than I did playing it, ashamed I couldn't give it a lower score.

— hurpfry on 4/17/2016 10:01:51 PM with a score of 0

Literal garbage.
And when you are married, you don't "break up." You "divorce."

— DerpBacon on 4/17/2016 7:07:16 PM with a score of 0

I mean, it was shut, but that's besides the point. Mizal, you use shift instead of Caps Lock? Weirdo. I know most people do it, but you're all still weird.

— Steve24833 on 4/17/2016 6:43:58 PM with a score of 0

werent many option

— lisa on 4/17/2016 5:38:16 PM with a score of 0

My kingdom for an edit button.

— Mizal on 4/17/2016 5:32:19 PM with a score of 0

This is a joke, right?

Either way, thought that 8 you gave yourself was awfully convincing, I think I'll have to go with a 1 instead.

P.S. Keyboards aren't really all that expensive, may I suggest replacing yours, the Shift key seems to be missing as well as the y and o that one normally require in words such as 'you'.