Player Comments on Moose's colour adventure
This was an interesting little game. Your writing was very good; I didn't notice any errors on the path I played through. The game was pretty fun to play through as well. The biggest problem for me is the length. It was over in a few pages, and the pages weren't long themselves either. If you make another story like this in the future, it is worth adding length. Stories that are this short tend to get low ratings even though the writing itself was pretty good.
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tjwilliams555
on 2/17/2017 3:44:17 AM with a score of 0
So.... What if I was African American to begin with?
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SonicTurboTurtle
on 4/27/2016 7:49:24 PM with a score of 0
Um... I don't know what happened, but I turned pink.
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Maxz92
on 10/8/2015 8:16:23 AM with a score of 0
I feel like I enjoyed this way more than I should have.
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BradinDvorak
on 9/15/2015 4:57:45 PM with a score of 0
YAY MOOOOSE
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— Gwennie on 3/30/2015 4:45:12 PM with a score of 0
Cereal killer? I kill cereals like Frosted Flakes?
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DerpBacon
on 2/21/2015 2:20:53 PM with a score of 0
The author kind of forced the reader to make "good" choices, otherwise it was the "you lose, play again" type thing.
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FazzTheMan
on 12/29/2014 3:26:52 AM with a score of 0
amazing!!!
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— shong on 12/23/2014 5:02:44 PM with a score of 0
Cereal killer? Coppers? Huh?
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— jelly on 7/17/2014 10:14:29 PM with a score of 0
Ugh what kind of game is this
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— jelly on 7/17/2014 10:09:20 PM with a score of 0
Boring. Just boring.
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CuteCatPaws
on 1/28/2014 5:36:59 PM with a score of 0
No offense, but I find it rather uninteresting. I was just looking for random stories and stumbled upon this one. But I must say it's a great start and one can always improve! :)
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— Ruby on 9/25/2013 1:02:54 PM with a score of 0
i actually think this is awesome for some reason. i have no idea why though.
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averagewriter
on 6/29/2013 6:13:10 AM with a score of 0
just turned pink, thanks to Moosette.
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toni
on 2/27/2013 9:47:41 PM with a score of 0
weak!!
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trevsjams
on 2/23/2013 4:47:18 PM with a score of 0
Another random story, but I have no idea who this appeals to anyways...
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Swiftstryker
on 2/20/2013 2:12:00 AM with a score of 0
Well, not much of a storyline or whatever, so i agree with BZ. This game IS Moosed up. It even has a nice ring to it...
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Xt1000305
on 2/5/2013 10:17:23 AM with a score of 0
Yay, rainbow moose or mooses or meese.
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Darkbound
on 2/4/2013 3:27:20 PM with a score of 0
That was... creative?
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swedishlemon
on 2/3/2013 11:12:04 PM with a score of 0
This game is moosed up man.
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BerkaZerka
on 2/3/2013 3:00:29 PM with a score of 0
Pink moose! Fuckin' pink moose!!!
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Briar_Rose
on 2/3/2013 2:14:07 PM with a score of 0
What? That's all I can say about this game.
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Aman
on 2/3/2013 12:14:42 PM with a score of 0
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