Player Comments on Mystery Spot > ChooseYourStory.com

Either this game isn't finished or this is some kind of joke either way. I see this story getting removed in the near future.

— BigRonn77 on 11/23/2016 11:20:32 AM with a score of 0

Awful just awful

— Robin3443 on 7/29/2016 12:09:15 AM with a score of 0

Oh wow... That was terrible...

— annaisawesome on 8/26/2015 6:40:31 PM with a score of 0

Well, rabbit tranny, I must say that this story is fairly long, given that most stories that rely on random lackluster humor are less than six pages long. You need to do some serious overhaul on the story's spelling, word choice, and punctuation, as well.

— jamescoker1226 on 10/30/2014 5:13:13 PM with a score of 0

"Wow, even worse than twilight."

— FazzTheMan on 10/29/2014 11:41:44 PM with a score of 0

Brought me enlightenment

— BSharpstory on 10/29/2014 5:22:20 PM with a score of 0

NiceSPNreferences.Ilikeit.Wouldplay again.10/10

— AKathleen on 10/29/2014 5:16:08 PM with a score of 0

It was an alright story, and I liked your writing style, although one page of the story didn't have an end page. And maybe add some more choices for the readers, so we could have more diversity in the story, instead of clicking a wrong link, that kills our character.

— Boringfirelion on 10/29/2014 5:10:03 PM with a score of 0

Why'd my brother have to stab me!!!??? :'(

— addievc on 10/29/2014 5:09:55 PM with a score of 0

This is amazing!

— love_lerm on 10/29/2014 5:01:32 PM with a score of 0