Player Comments on natianal park > ChooseYourStory.com

Even the title's spelling is wrong so, you can guess how much other's would be!

— RobustSporadic on 7/25/2012 10:45:20 PM with a score of 0

Just plain stupid

— cocoamaker on 12/11/2010 5:45:18 PM with a score of 0

Make the bad spelling go away mommy. Also, putting a giant 'you win' right under a $500 fine? Is that supposed to be ironic? Actually, that was pretty funny.

— Melike on 1/1/2009 9:39:17 AM with a score of 0

supafreak supasucks at making supagames.

— quadcam on 4/11/2007 6:24:24 AM with a score of 0

hi

— tao13 on 3/26/2007 12:23:37 PM with a score of 0

The newest way to kill a bunny.

— PrinceOProvidence on 1/7/2007 5:52:47 PM with a score of 0

Good concept but... mayber your next story should feature more plot structure and (you know I have to say it. Sorry!) better spelling.

— Sir_Lancegalawain on 11/25/2006 5:02:26 PM with a score of 0

National. The word is national. Unless it's some strange kind of park I've never heard of. Anyway, it's a good idea for a game, make the next one longer and spell better.

— Sethaniel on 10/23/2006 10:40:38 AM with a score of 0

Make it longer and put some more complications in to make it a better story. Spell things better too.

— October on 10/21/2006 11:00:02 PM with a score of 0

This is one of those, "you wake up and see a man he says hi to u u do wht etll him go away or throw fire at him and then hide" type stories.

— madglee on 9/11/2006 1:58:11 PM with a score of 0

not much of a story. and could use more detail.

— nate on 7/8/2006 1:52:34 PM with a score of 0

This game is kind of short. If you wanna make it a wilderness survival game, at least make it longer. And how do you make a fire? Wouldn't throwing rocks scare bunnies away? Strawberries, apples, and coconuts aren't native to the same place. Make it more realistic, too.

— Stevnik on 5/30/2006 9:00:29 PM with a score of 0

hmm.....

— Stargazer on 3/22/2006 6:33:51 PM with a score of 0

i won. Poor writing and story telling. Not much in the way of choice. needs work.

— march5th00 on 12/8/2005 11:14:14 PM with a score of 0

The overall concept is funny; it's a pretty short game though, so don't expect a whole lot.

— alexp on 12/4/2005 7:55:05 PM with a score of 0

Not as good as your other game, good effort though. 3/8

— Eddy on 11/5/2005 12:58:39 AM with a score of 0

I rated you a five but only because it was your first game and it had I think a replayability feature. Work on grammer please.

— havacoman on 9/30/2005 9:21:24 PM with a score of 0

Wow, suprisingly good. I would recommend this to quick wanting players. Next time add End game and leave comments on bad places as well, also make it longer. Good game though, 5/8.