Player Comments on Paul's Health Project...

I feel like with some of the more important decisions, you should have more options. There is a radical difference between a school shooting and "dealing with bullies in your own way." I feel like we should also be able to turn down the cigarette and other choices like that. I think its been said, the story by its nature could do with some more choices. That said, there was an impressive difference in the outcomes based on your decisions and a fair number of endings.

— ugilick on 4/13/2013 11:44:51 AM with a score of 0

As a health project, this is pretty nice, except for the fact that you're telling the reader the reprocussions of their actions right after they do it. Sure it would explain the downward spiral one might take in life, but might it have been a tad bit different if you waited until the end of the story to tell the causes of those actions?

Well, that's your choice.

— Swiftstryker on 4/6/2013 4:11:41 AM with a score of 0

It was okay, but it could've been way better (a few grammar mistakes, some choices were pointless, etc.) 4/8

— Yuisawachelsa on 6/19/2016 9:22:44 AM with a score of 0

This was interesting, possibly though the conclusion was a little bit unexpected. It would be interesting to see this used as an educational tool, I think it would be good for that.

— Will11 on 11/10/2014 11:54:30 PM with a score of 0

YOU CANT WIN!

— epiclab on 4/15/2013 11:40:06 PM with a score of 0

"you decide to never go to any parties ever again." you should've added a fact about trauma / PTSD.

— toni on 4/8/2013 2:27:08 AM with a score of 0

Sex? Alcohol? Cigarettes? Nty

— theunseen1 on 4/7/2013 8:32:15 PM with a score of 0

So... neutral feelings about school get me landed in jail? Really, you should do SOMETHING to make the "meh" path more interesting.

— nitrogalaxy on 4/6/2013 11:20:45 AM with a score of 0

Very good game with a few different branches and plenty of information. Could do with a few more choices but Highly recommended nonetheless. 7/8

— CP30 on 4/4/2013 10:36:26 AM with a score of 0

AWESOME GAME! *High Five! Take this rabbit!

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— haledakota on 4/3/2013 10:03:38 PM with a score of 0

Pretty good. The writing was more than decent, with multiple paths that gave me the impression that quite a bit of effort has been put into this. Also, I liked the information that you gave. 5/8

— Xt1000305 on 4/3/2013 9:56:47 PM with a score of 0

Pretty good. The writing was more than decent, with multiple paths that gave me the impression that quite a bit of effort has been put into this. Also, I liked the information that you gave. 5/8