Player Comments on Puff Ball Madness (from DestielCon 2015)
that was very short
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annaisawesome
on 8/9/2016 4:40:01 PM with a score of 0
Too short. Also, probably made a lot more sense and the con.
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madmax
on 6/12/2016 6:42:49 PM with a score of 0
I'm guessing the game made more sense at the DestielCon thingy. As it is though, it doesn't make sense but the writing's decent and the story's kind of cute.
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Briar_Rose
on 1/18/2016 7:10:02 PM with a score of 0
What, over already? Alright then...
Needs more detail; as it is, it's just BOOOOORING.
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Aducan
on 10/2/2015 5:38:23 AM with a score of 0
You do not need to put these "go to" statements at the end of every link, it's not a book and the blue clicky links will magically transport use to whatever page you are referring to. I'm puzzled by who the characters were and mostly what the story is about, expand your descriptions to cover more than 1 or 2 sentences per page to increase the reader's interest :)
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Will11
on 10/2/2015 12:09:51 AM with a score of 0
I really didn't read anything because there needs to be more dragons in life...
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— HI on 10/1/2015 8:49:05 PM with a score of 0
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