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For people inquiring about my name, it is my brothers name and mine fused. I also love post-apocalyptic stories and games. First game I ever played here was Ground Zero.
My hobbies are,
Hiking, Camping, Archery, Reading, Writing, (badly, but I try) Cooking
Pretty much as long as it doesn't pertain to religion or politics, I'm good!
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This is my first story game, and in the likely event it is hated, it shall be unpublished by me unceremoniously. I've been playing a lot of Fallen London recently, and was inspired to write something with Victorian overtones. A bit silly, to be frank.
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Advice on how to continue? on 12/8/2017 3:44:48 PMI find a lot of times, my best writing comes from whatever's brewing in my head at the moment. It's pretty unsuitable for larger pieces and imo, a really bad habit tbh
Advice on how to continue? on 12/8/2017 3:42:37 PM
For the P.S. I accidentally wrote that bit twice, thanks! I understand it's hard to coach someone when they're new to a form of writing, so thank you so much!
Advice on how to continue? on 12/7/2017 6:02:51 PM
Okay. That makes sense. So use the spider shit as a hook, then go deeper with it?
Advice on how to continue? on 12/7/2017 6:00:44 PM
I'm trying to create a fucked-up victorian vibe. I really should've expanded on that, maybe?
Advice on how to continue? on 12/7/2017 5:30:29 PM
http://chooseyourstory.com/story/viewer/default.aspx?StoryId=52091
This is my first storygame, even though I've been reading around here for about 4 years. I'm really stuck on what to do next? any ideas? Thank you.
How do I write a story without seeming too direct? on 12/6/2017 7:34:47 PM
Interesting, thank you.
How do I write a story without seeming too direct? on 12/6/2017 7:22:27 PM
Yeah, I know that, it's just I can't seem to write in decisions, if that connects? For instance, having a scenario that isn't completely controlled by me. Giving agency is my struggle.
ive been gone for about 6 months, hows it hanging? on 12/6/2017 7:21:11 PM
ha
what does warden mean? on 12/6/2017 7:19:09 PM
Also, thank you for Ground Zero. I've probably played it 20 times over the years.
what does warden mean? on 12/6/2017 7:18:42 PM
Damn EndMaster, you've been active for years.