Player Comments on Rings of Stone

Decent prologue to the true story. Can't really call it much more than that, as it stops literally as soon as you would have started the school aspect.

Characters have potential, but we didn't really have enough time to explore any of them.

It held my attention, although I hated that you used single quotes instead of double for dialogue. Some parts also seems cluttered, along with some spelling and grammar errors.

— Killa_Robot on 7/16/2016 8:42:49 PM with a score of 0

Man. It ended just when it was starting to get good.

I felt early vibes of Harry Potter and later vibes of Percy Jackson; and while that's not altogether original I think you pulled it off. For me this is a case where the writing was far superior to the plot.

That being said, since the story hadn't quite started yet it was still well written and enjoyable; though I am left wanting more.

— donteatpoop on 7/7/2016 2:34:35 AM with a score of 0

Ok

— The_L on 5/27/2019 11:48:13 AM with a score of 0

make more

— thanos on 5/13/2019 9:57:32 AM with a score of 0

I look forward to the rest of the story

— Faervel on 2/25/2019 10:02:23 AM with a score of 0

I enjoyed this. Please make something similiar

— Hanna on 6/19/2018 11:59:22 AM with a score of 0

Ah, it's simply too short. So I pick a stream and then the game just ends? Boring!

— TestingJest on 9/22/2017 1:12:35 AM with a score of 0

I would love to have a next chapter

— Dark_Storm on 8/4/2017 5:35:29 AM with a score of 0

I must say after playing this again I truly do enjoy it and hoping for a part 2!

— MetaMason on 1/31/2017 12:02:21 PM with a score of 0

9.9/10

— MetaMason on 1/24/2017 12:13:12 PM with a score of 0

It's like Harry Potter:).

— Stormfeather on 12/20/2016 9:17:51 PM with a score of 0

Great story, can't wait for more.

— Voltage on 11/30/2016 12:16:58 PM with a score of 0

Very, very good. I can't wait till the longer version! There are virtually no grammar mistakes, and is pretty non-linear. So I can only say that you should make the armor have an actual picture, rather than a brown bag.

— Mage on 10/13/2016 9:09:21 PM with a score of 0

That's was a awesome introduction. I look forward to read the whole story.

— Bianca95 on 10/4/2016 12:40:25 PM with a score of 0

The abrupt end was quite annoying even though you had no other choice. I'd like to see the rest of the story.

— WouldntItBeNice on 7/10/2016 4:17:18 PM with a score of 0

Love it. can't wait for the Full Story/Game

— AceSpeedNinja on 7/8/2016 1:15:56 AM with a score of 0

Not bad.

— Nazhfa on 7/7/2016 2:31:42 AM with a score of 0

I would like a part two. 6/8

— Shadow_Strider on 7/4/2016 12:14:42 AM with a score of 0

Oops, someone forgot to un-coauthor Kiel.

— MasonJarGuzzi on 7/3/2016 10:18:39 PM with a score of 0