Player Comments on Sanity in Turmoil
At first, I felt that it was confusing but then after a few pages you explained everything. The plot was alright. Not entirely boring nor interesting. It was just right. One thing I loved about this though is the detail and description. When you described the family, that part was amazing.
This was a great effort altogether. Keep writing! I can see that there is plenty of potential.
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Penworth
on 6/20/2015 9:29:10 PM with a score of 0
I've achieved the perfect ending, and might I say that was a pretty nice story. I like the world it was within and I enjoyed how you didn't describe the rape scene in great detail. Good Game.
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ReapersBoy
on 3/2/2017 5:51:21 PM with a score of 0
It was good, I liked it actually
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Il_Maestro
on 9/7/2013 3:34:59 AM with a score of 0
Yay, I got the perfect ending!
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iamayeti
on 8/12/2013 1:46:46 PM with a score of 0
Aww I clicked the wrong button and got the worst ending :(
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— SpaceGirl on 1/26/2013 2:04:53 PM with a score of 0
EMILY YOU MENTIONED ME! I feel loved :D This was brilliant and VVERRYYY creative. I loved the different endings and the descriptions are amazing!
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CABcaitlin
on 1/26/2013 11:00:38 AM with a score of 0
It's not bad, but you should finish before publishing or say that this is a demo. Good writing.
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Xt1000305
on 12/8/2012 7:19:07 AM with a score of 0
Decent start but not finished 4/8
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EpicHero
on 12/6/2012 6:03:51 PM with a score of 0
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