Player Comments on Sarah Palin in a Bind
There really isn't much to this story game. What's there is ok. I would really like to see more story and more choices.
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Faervel
on 1/24/2019 3:28:12 PM with a score of 0
This could have been so much more.
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OriginalClamurai
on 1/23/2019 10:42:43 PM with a score of 0
Not as embarrassingly bad as expected. The grammar is pretty decent, and sure, humor is subjective but I've seen cringier attempts. Just, I'm pretty sure I've written longer grocery lists than this. This entire story could fit on a single square of toilet paper and be read in its entirety faster than it takes to flush it.
For a better example of short political parody (not that the bar is set very high)see http://chooseyourstory.com/story/waiting-for-the-(trump)-train
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Mizal
on 1/23/2019 3:48:16 PM with a score of 0
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