Player Comments on Star Wars: A Padawan's Journey Part 3: Trials

NICE!

Really, really, really, really entertaining and exciting i loved this chapter, it feels likes the stakes have been raised here and I can't wait to play more, hopefully I can find Part 4 of the game because I can't find the link no matter how I look, but hopefully I'll find it, or you can send me a link to it?

Anyways great game :)

good taste of fighting

Each one you have made is better and better. The only thing that I could do with would be even more choices, a way to give off some of your characters personality (choices for being arrogant, polite, kind mean, stuff like that)

Forgot to rate this while playing a long time ago. Pretty fun.

Great! Has many grammar and spelling errors, but it is still awesome.

Ok, I do like the story, it’s a good concept, but and this is why the mark is not higher, I am getting fed up with the use of real life equipment instead of Star Wars equipment, for example: Motorcycle, robots, Jets, not to mention the jedi in this are more like everyday people when they should be Zen like monks.

By the way, Motorcycle = speeder bike
Robots = Driods
Jets = Starships
and Jedi are a kin to Monks, and do not use blasters.

This touch of mundaneness is really annoying and really pulls a reader from the fantasy you are trying to absorb your readers into. If you don't know what something is called, in the star wars Universe, look it up, Wookiepedia is great for that.

its a bit better than the first 2, much longer, but not much in choice, it doesnt branch, you choose one choice and if its wrong you die, needs variety

Good job

Its good.

Amazing!!!

I'm giving you a 4, you tried, and its obvious you put some effort in, but I'm gunna be honest and say you have no idea about star wars. At all. Jedi are not aloud to have relationships, never mind children. So the general who had a kids a long shot. As for the incorrect names for some of the vehicles, extremely wrong settings for the sith temple (it was actually a Jedi base...) and your awful spelling... well, do I need to go on?

That was freakin awesome best one so far now i have to finish them

Entertaining, however the spelling mistakes are very noticeable.

they keep getting better and better! <3

The length was good but I hope that sometime in the future, your Jedi will stop letting their emotions control them this much.

First its really great made me happy :) but some ideas: 1) an option for girls as the hero! Some of us adore Star wars too :D 2) another series with your own characters and /or maybe some from the movies (ex itd be cool to confront dooku or flirt with qui-gon ..if a girl obviously but one for guys too!) 3) if you do get to a place where character is killed or it has to end have a way to go back to last page rather than from begining! thanks!!

WOW! These missions are getting harder and harder. I really liked the part when I lost the green lightsaber and then got it back later. I also won the trophy, cause I'm cool like that. Fun game!

I'd like it if you made it to where you can fail a mission and still continue with the story. So that death isn't the only reprocussion for a persons mistakes.

Everytime you make a new chapter it just gets better and better, great work so far

Best one of the series.

Best of the series so far. Major problems are linearity, useless hints (what's the point of a hint if you have to die first?), and many typos (it seems like you didn't even run it through a spellcheck program). The good news is you tied it in well with the other episodes with the backstory and little details. The pictures, items, and achievements also aided your storytelling. I would recommend this story for Feature if you cleaned up the issues I indicated and combined all the finished episodes into one epic story.