Player Comments on The Holiday Out

Pro tip: "aurquid" isn't a word. "Awkward" is.

— GMB13carat on 8/4/2015 8:26:10 PM with a score of 0

I loved it and ignore all the bad comments.

— Lilly on 6/27/2015 1:07:11 PM with a score of 0

I'm gonna try and be a little kinder with you. . .

Always remember. A great story needs two things, true effort and time. Without these, a story is always going to turn out quite crappy.

— Penworth on 6/27/2015 11:08:57 AM with a score of 0

Just another piece of garbage that's worth deleting. It seems that we're playing as a female character.

— Raven47 on 6/26/2015 9:44:26 PM with a score of 0

Another person helping bring down this site into the gutters with poorly-written 2-minute stories :(

— Will11 on 6/26/2015 2:37:10 PM with a score of 0

Well done you did great!!!

— toni_xoxo on 6/26/2015 4:44:27 AM with a score of 0

Thank you for you constructive criticism we really appreciate it and we will take all your comments on board! BradinDvorak

— TheHolidayOut on 6/26/2015 4:43:51 AM with a score of 0

Well, with a maximum of two sentences per page, it's pretty short, and seems to be missing some links, too. I'd recommend fleshing out the description on each page and avoiding the binary "continue or die" choices of which there were an overwhelming majority, as well as double-checking the spelling and grammar. Also, never have an "End Game" link that isn't labeled as such; that's only ever majorly frustrating to the reader.

As a side note, "aurquid" is an amazing misspelling.

— BradinDvorak on 6/26/2015 4:40:36 AM with a score of 0

Yep, it's another piece of shit "game"... knew that based on the reviews alone. You're not fooling anyone.