Player Comments on The Time Chair

I'm unpublishing this because it's not really a CYOA. All wrong choices lead nowhere. Fix this up (particularly your spelling and grammar) and add some other branches and then republish it.

— JJJ-thebanisher on 5/5/2011 4:23:44 PM with a score of 0

The "wrong" choices force you to go back and pick the other path.

— Sethaniel on 5/4/2011 5:15:05 PM with a score of 0

Short and not enough options but good concept and story line

— bradhal on 4/28/2011 4:24:29 AM with a score of 0

Add more possible endings; even though my first game is pretty short, there are a bunch of ways it could end, and that got me some higher ratings.

— tgsunrise on 4/24/2011 7:04:04 AM with a score of 0

A story that could be good, with a lot of mistakes fixed, and choices fleshed out. Creepy and Ginger were never propperly identified. How did we meet Creepy, and how did Ginger become our sworn enemy?

— Jordan on 4/11/2011 11:16:36 PM with a score of 0

You need to add a lot more to this before it can be good. the biggest part i hated (other than the linear storyline) was the fact that you can only make two choices. i suggest you make this way more complex. Anything that deal with traveling in time is ALWAYS too complicated to understand the entire story until the very end.

— alienalpha on 4/9/2011 6:11:23 PM with a score of 0

this was not a choose your own adventure story. this was a very short story with a very large number of mistakes in it.

— ugilick on 4/6/2011 9:13:30 PM with a score of 0

You know, for a game about ignoring the constraints of chronological time, it is awfully linear. FAIL!!!