Player Comments on The Time Lock > ChooseYourStory.com

English, motherfucker! Do you speak it?

— Malkalack on 10/9/2017 3:41:04 PM with a score of 0

I didn't read this because it twas unformatted text walls but from the other comments it doesn't sound like I missed much.

— Mizal on 10/9/2017 5:29:42 AM with a score of 0

Oh, this is bad. This is making my eyes suffer by reading it. The basic standards of writing have been butchered, turned inside out, and regurgitated as a chaotic mess of incoherent sentences.

"Only experienced readers should read" - well by your logic, only experienced writers should write, and you are neither of these.

— Saika on 10/9/2017 4:52:45 AM with a score of 0

""Why are you able to kill people and not care?"...."Because im a functioning sociopath and I sold my soul to Bella so I really don't have feelings or remorse". A Time Pirate walks in and shoots you."I said silence!!!"

THE END"

Really? Too bad it had to end this way. So that's why it got 3/8. ;)