Player Comments on The Wave Of Dumb

Sounds like Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy on acid.

Stranger than Kubrick, more boring than Allen, more surreal than Aronofsky. You'd think those would be complements... but they aren't

Akward...

Went down some hallways and through some doors woke up in space. 10/8 best game ever

A bit too circular for me, otherwise good.

It was way too confusing and I don't want to look like a hater but come on it isn't meant for people like me who like organization.

Hmm...nice writing, you just need to think of a nice plot to keep people interested. I suggest a coauthor to inspire you and unleash you upon the world!

I get the fact that your'e trying to be funny with an immature and comical sense, but you need to see that there is a stopping point. As Allusional said below, I like the writing, but the story has no point. Even the most immature story games need a plot. Good job on your first story game.
4/8

What on God's Earth was that? How did I end up being chased by an indoor bulldozer then suddenly be in space?

This would be an ideal game to play while abusing illegal substances, it might even make more sense.

HATED

wut

I appreciate that you made an effort, but there's a certain point where a game that doesn't make sense isn't very amusing to the reader, and I think it's crossed that point. The writing is good, considering this is your first story game, but otherwise some plot development would really be nice.