Player Comments on The Yule Ball > ChooseYourStory.com

Eh, i was hoping it or at least i thought it would be digital or have pictures.

— Charlotte on 7/16/2018 9:27:18 PM with a score of 0

Nice story. It was a bit short but good especially for your first story :)

— melonlowz on 10/24/2015 8:08:15 PM with a score of 0

Bucky, I posted it because I used it as a quick project for my computer tech class. I made an easy 'A'. It wasn't meant to be perfect because I save my actual writing for Wattpad.

— cinnahoran on 10/19/2015 1:52:09 AM with a score of 0

If you didn't really try, why bother posting it? You should take pride in your writing.

— Bucky on 10/17/2015 9:04:11 AM with a score of 0

Hey everyone, I know this sucked xD and I actually didn't really try. Honestly I just did this to pass the time. Thanks for your comments! -signed out

— cinnahoran on 10/13/2015 2:40:57 PM with a score of 0

Very short, and some pretty bad grammar cause this story to fall kind of flat. Also, (character name here) is not acceptable, that's just really poor.

— Bloodsrain on 10/8/2015 1:05:32 PM with a score of 0

"(Character Name)"!? Seriously? Do you WANT to get an instant 1? Because that's how you get an instant 1.

— ISentinelPenguinI on 10/8/2015 9:43:52 AM with a score of 0

(insert comment here).

REALLY dislike that kind of stuff in writing. Also, way too short.

— Aducan on 10/5/2015 4:58:52 AM with a score of 0