Player Comments on Trumpet Intro > ChooseYourStory.com

I'm going to assume you were trying to be funny with the sheer randomness of this game, because one moment you're choosing a Pokémon, and the next you're running from a food company mascot attempting to kill you with bookshelves. I guess I should have laughed, but I still felt absolutely no emotion here.

— ScrubLord on 4/27/2016 1:24:29 PM with a score of 0

I got a cookie as well

— Shadowgirl_101 on 4/18/2016 3:23:24 PM with a score of 0

GOD DAMNIT. NOW YOU MADE ME HUNGRY AGAIN. THANKS -.-

But seriously, the storyline needs to branch out instead of killing me every time I mess up...

— CurseOfTime on 3/23/2016 8:36:44 PM with a score of 0

Umm.. Thanks for the cookie?

— SonicTurboTurtle on 3/15/2016 6:42:21 PM with a score of 0

Too random :(

— Timeless_Sakura on 2/12/2016 10:17:56 PM with a score of 0

I got a cookie

— Sir Tacoman on 3/4/2015 9:08:49 AM with a score of 0

This was random, rather a bit too random.

— Madbrad200 on 7/27/2014 9:30:57 AM with a score of 0

Short, plotless, and neither challenging or engaging. I suppose the grammar wasn't too bad though.

— bilbo on 7/27/2014 2:47:05 AM with a score of 0

No storyline. It feels like you were trying to be funny but I'm not sure I share the same sense of humour as you... Grammar was quite good, and it feels like you could write a real story is you felt like it. Also the choices you made had absolutely no impact on the actual story.

— insanebutvain on 6/17/2014 11:14:32 PM with a score of 0

You need a better storyline, but your language is ok

— Xt1000305 on 9/22/2012 6:11:11 AM with a score of 0

Barely amusing, but it managed to make me scoff. As with all random stories, it's not gonna get higher than a 2. Nevertheless, I bet you could make a really good story with a bit of time and effort. You've got the grammar and enthusiasm .

— Swiftstryker on 9/20/2012 1:01:38 AM with a score of 0

It was mildly amusing, however, there was a slight problem with it...arcanine is no match for Charizard! Don't compare apples (Charizard) and smelly crotch (Arcanine) like that.

— RealSlimShady on 9/18/2012 3:34:01 PM with a score of 0

Clever =)

— BerkaZerka on 9/18/2012 11:14:02 AM with a score of 0

The kitten got me... And because of that, I played the game. I died once, then got the cookie. It wasn't really my cup of tea, but it was better than some story games I've read that have similar concepts. I give it a 3/8

— simplesabley on 9/18/2012 9:32:58 AM with a score of 0

I tried to eat cookie, but my security deleted it.

— alienalpha on 9/18/2012 7:10:09 AM with a score of 0

I died twice.

— Frodo on 9/18/2012 6:18:04 AM with a score of 0

This is precisely what I needed to do at 2:48 in the morning!

— Sean on 9/18/2012 2:49:49 AM with a score of 0

Methinks we have a winner for most impressive intro.

— Luigi on 9/17/2012 11:14:50 PM with a score of 0

Trumpet? This was a mediocre game with a hint of humor. Although Dr. Horrible is awesome, I'm afraid I have to give this a 2/8

— betaband on 9/17/2012 10:54:31 PM with a score of 0

too random and it wouldn't just let me die and quit, two things I severely dislike in a game.

— ThisisBo on 9/17/2012 10:24:43 PM with a score of 0