Player Comments on try #2

Please tell me this is a troll game.

What the heck was this?

Um, okay... another free point for me I suppose...

Oh, yes, the die option may be horribly stupid and pointless and also insulting, but it is by far the best option to choose if you play this game and don't want your eyes burned out.

Trust me, Briar. You saved yourself a world of agony, by just hitting die.

Im sorry but including a "die" option is just about the dumbest thing anyone can think of doing.

... Yeah, I just picked "die" at the beginning. Saves a lot of time. ^_^

This was just... horrible. What is wrong with this? Everything. What is wrong with you? Everything. Seriously, take this down. Horrible grammar, horrible story, horrible ideas. I am sick of people like you, writing crap stories like this. If you are going to write a story, write a good one!

Firstly, your grammar and punctuation is horrific. I didn't see a single comma, and there were only full stops at the end of a paragraph. You is spelt you, by the way. To me, it looks like you wrote this in your sleep. While having a nightmare.

Secondly, the plot line is just nothing. Same old Cat clan game, same old horrible plotline. I would be surprised if I saw a good one of these games.

I have no more time, so this game is just horrible. Please take it down. ASAP. 1/8.

I don't even know what to do at this point...except for this:

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

NO NO NO! KILL IT WITH FIRE!! DIE UNHOLY BANE!

Excuse me for my rudeness.

Do you speak english as a first language? Do you speak english at all?

I m sorry I worked hard and fixed all the spelling errors but plz give me some credit

Maybe WC just isn't your thing. It's certainly not highly regarded on this site. Try a different genre, and please ask other members for help. It's not that hard, and you don't have to swallow your pride. We'll help you if you really want it...

I feel offended that you called me an idiot. And I don't know why I am feeling angry right now, probably from the recent publish of games like this one. I absolutely hated this, and will never come back to read it, unless you fix it. If you had at least put effort into it, I would've gave it a four maybe, just for trying.

Now if you make a game, I will remember your username (okay, maybe not) and I will probably hesitate to play. I am sorry for my rudeness right now, but I am getting sick of these kinds of games, and I've only been on this site for a year.

I'm going to print this story out and use it as rolling paper for my next blunt.

Pathetic

Well.....

This is an abomination. Hopefully Fazz posts...

Damn. This is even worse. Please stop making stories.

To answer your question below: No.

To quote the game...
"die."

Needs some serious work, try again.

If you were going for serious fanfic, you failed miserably in making this interesting.

If you were going for humor, it was dull, cliché, and overdone.

Either way, this was an awful game, one that we have seen the likes of a million times before. I hate to be rude, and I hate to seem immature, but this honestly sucks. If you can't tell by my first two paragraphs, the intent of the game wasn't even clear. I couldn't tell if all the grammatical mishaps were authentic or if you were just trying to satire the writing of WC fanfics. Either way, all I'm giving you is a 1/8.

lol is dis good?