Player Comments on Welcome to The Grand Tour of This Luxurious Pompeiian Abode
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Mizal
on 10/18/2020 8:46:27 AM with a score of 0
It was okay. But severe points taken off for the linearness. You were given 1 choice on most of the pages, which you tried to make less obvious by putting a link to “Works Cited” on EVERY. SINGLE. PAGE. No need for that. And that random link to the first page was just dumb.
Try posting this on a non-CYOA website if you want people to like it. Unfortunately, since this is a CYOA website, I can’t rate you higher than a 2/8. Sorry.
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325boy
on 10/17/2020 11:58:12 PM with a score of 0
Necesse est ludum verum facere, non liber ut linea recta.
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Gower
on 10/17/2020 11:02:33 PM with a score of 0
A short educational piece describing rooms in a Roman building and what they were used for. It's not exactly entertaining. It cites its sources, so I assume it's all true. Seems alright for what it is.
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AnthonyScoffler
on 10/17/2020 10:58:38 PM with a score of 0
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