Player Comments on Witness
This story seems to be about "couple of young black guys" starting trouble at a convenience store. I couldn't really figure out the plot based on the couple of branches I tried, and one of the variables seems to have been incorrectly used, as the word "ELSE" and two percentage signs are just sitting in the middle of one page.
I'd say the author is correct in that this story is incomplete. But it's short, so that wins it a point in this review.
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Fluxion
on 11/5/2024 3:58:47 PM with a score of 0
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