TharaApples, The Grandmaster of the Written Word
I like to read and sometimes partake in some witchcraft here and there. Apples are also great, as they're good for consumption and being turned into juice, as well as various pastries.
My name is Thara if you couldn't tell. A witch that was turned apple goddess by her own admission. I have a wealth of knowledge on silly things.
An unforeseen event leads you to being inside of a forest in the dark of night. Now you must leave the forest right in time before your curfew, and so you can make it on time to class tomorrow for an important test. Will you be able to do so?
Update (2/14/21): Fixed the grammatical error in what’s essentially the first sentence, which is thanks to mizal.
This storygame is quite a short one, and intentionally so. I tried making it about 1200 words, as it's inspired by an existing game with a number that is close to 1200(1,232), but this is definitely a bit more inspired by a thread that is about that very game.
Dedicated to making mizal happy, and EndMaster for his constant support. Oh, and the nice community of CYS.
This was made in a night of drinking tea and eating chocolates for inspiration.
In any case, I hope this short little story is something that can be enjoyed.
Family must die. With a kingdom in shambles, and a crown too heavy in the weight of both responsibility and sin, someone must acquiesce the throne. But what can one princess do?
Update: Taking ninjapitka's very helpful and wonderful comment in mind, I've went back to this story to iron out many of the typos that were present in the first publishing. So I want to thank him for basically allowing me to bring a hopefully improved story-game here for you all to experience. However, there still might be some that are present. If so, feel free to point them out in a comment or message me directly if you feel the want/need. In any case, I hope any potential enjoyment isn't too badly affected, and that this is something that can be found fun in some capacity. Thank you to ninjapitka again, and whoever reads this.
Update #2: The story-game is in the progress of being proofread and fixed up a bit. A special thank you to Tim36D for sitting down and giving me a list to follow for these corrections.
This story is a contest entry for EndMaster's Dark Fantasy Edge lord contest 2. I wouldn’t call the protagonist in this instance an edgelord, but the story does have some rather dark themes to say the least.
Foolish Princess has three endings that you can receive. There's one that is honesty pretty normal. One that can be considered the 'bad' ending. And there's a 'true' ending that can be reached as well.
I hope you all enjoy it.
Recent Postsprivate messages on 4/13/2021 1:53:49 PM
This is certainly very thread worthy.
Okay, who yoinked my points? on 4/10/2021 9:39:38 PM
I'm sure mizal will be happy to hear that.
Okay, who yoinked my points? on 4/10/2021 9:21:11 PM
Morgan is under Malk's protection. However, since mizal has insisted, my story better be at the top of her list. If not, this will never end. I might consider your words in that instance.
Okay, who yoinked my points? on 4/10/2021 5:57:30 AM
Because why not?
EndMaster's short stories on 4/9/2021 6:05:59 PM
Oh, the original post was already commended for this monster eating thing.
Since you're you End, I suppose it's worth two comms actually.
Succubus Muse on 4/9/2021 12:24:02 PM
This is very intriguing. It's almost like a big crossover of sorts. However, then you remember that many of your games share a universe. So it's only the natural order of things, one could say.
Interesting Comments 6 on 4/3/2021 12:54:17 AM
Not only did we play through this multiple times (and J.O both times[thanks for that by the way]), but we thoroughly enjoyed your beautiful love story. We also have an ILF fetish and would love to meet Natalie (online...at first) This can be discussed later, in depth preferably and with graphs. How much fruit punch can you chug? I can chug a quart before I yack, but that's because of the volume, not the flavor. <3
-- Public Access on 4/3/2021 12:37:34 AM with a score of 2
Not sure if they're just repeating some line that might be in the story, from a route I haven't yet experienced maybe.
But if not,
There might be some interest in your direction. They don't have an account, so I'm not sure how one can potentially press for any details regarding this matter.
Hiya there. on 4/1/2021 12:24:00 PM
I'll just save everyone's time.
Oooooh~ I can see every account you make~
Hiya there. on 4/1/2021 11:54:24 AM
"I’m sorry you feel that way about alts or whatever my only other account on here was vanillaphobia, Im surprised your mad about people wanting to be on your site. It’s whatever, Ill just yknow write a story or something :)"
No need. :)
Interesting Comments 6 on 3/31/2021 9:49:22 PM
I hate it you bitch
-- ella grace balck on 10/18/2019 11:05:39 PM with a score of 0
READ THE BOOK....NOW!
Plz you are embarrassing her,you are embarrassing JK ROWLING FOR GOD'S SHAKE
-- NO! on 2/4/2018 11:56:52 AM with a score of
Ok first off don't listen to anyone who says its 'not what happened' because this isn't supposed to be according to the cursed child (which who's plot isn't even that good anyway i don't know why people consider it canon) almost every one of these are supposed to be a new storyline that you've never seen before which makes it fun!
And I do have to admit the grammar and spelling is pretty bad but COME ON it's not like they misspelled every word! And can you people not understand what they were trying to say? Obviously the author probably knows about the errors and will fix them in later stories. The spelling errors and grammar aren't that big of a problem unless you're literally two and can't understand what the author meant
The plot line of Draco trying to become the dark lord could ACTUALLY have happened if you think about it so idk why some people are upset with that. I'll admit the plot does have some holes and moves kinda fast but was I expecting an entire book? No so I'm not that upset with the plot seeing how it is much more lengthy than other stories I've read.
Overall this was super fun to play its just missing a few elements but if you're going into these stories expecting for it to be like a published book you're crazy. Everyone who leaves bad reviews are just whining over grammar and because they liked the cursed child and were upset that this wasn't it to a tee. This was very fun and I loved playing it. I can't wait to see what the author does next now that they have everyone's not so nice and not so constructive criticism. From now on I hope that everyone can actually leave criticism with the intention to HELP the author with their next adventure. ??
-- Not disappointed on 8/16/2019 10:30:10 AM with a score of
Well, that was interesting. To think I haven't even begun to read it yet at the moment. Now I'm a bit excited to do so.