Player Comments on 2035 > ChooseYourStory.com

"... you head home on a cis-containment communal public transportation vehicle, powered via correctional anal-phallic insertional therapy via trans-genderal tesla phalluses."

— FazzTheMan on 12/3/2014 8:12:25 PM with a score of 0

Although to be clear, I don't agree with the message in the book.

— Madbrad200 on 6/14/2014 10:59:24 AM with a score of 0

hahaha This game is brilliantly satire. Grammar is great and I had a lot of fun.

— Madbrad200 on 6/14/2014 10:54:00 AM with a score of 0

This game is a piece of crap!

— dbzfan94 on 5/21/2014 9:21:42 PM with a score of 0

I actually liked it. It made me laugh.

— Jihelu on 4/21/2014 12:33:10 PM with a score of 0

This crap is what happens when your mind is f@$# up on inhaling duster and smoking crack!. 1/8

— Honor4Ever on 4/21/2014 10:33:21 AM with a score of 0

Okay…

— Nightsky on 4/20/2014 8:24:03 PM with a score of 0

Probably the best game on this site

— Drakoblare on 4/20/2014 4:32:07 PM with a score of 0

It's Like Harrison Bergeron, but with Kurt Vonnegut being a devout Nazi!

— ISentinelPenguinI on 10/30/2013 9:42:56 PM with a score of 0

Dafuq?

— naruyashan on 10/29/2013 1:30:19 PM with a score of 0

Also a piece of crap... but funny

— Drakilian on 4/13/2013 6:59:14 PM with a score of 0

Maybe there is something wrong with me, but I was amused.

— ugilick on 4/6/2013 7:33:18 PM with a score of 0

10/10 really good stuff, I especially enjoyed all the transexuals!

— aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa on 4/6/2013 6:20:01 PM with a score of 0

What the fuck is this?

— walker on 4/6/2013 2:45:26 PM with a score of 0

Did I get a good or a bad ending?

— ck23838 on 4/6/2013 2:34:11 AM with a score of 0

-_- not funny this game is racist, sexist and whole bunch of other things.

— hugo23 on 4/6/2013 12:26:53 AM with a score of 0

incredibly bigoted

— JamesValkyrie on 4/5/2013 3:10:05 PM with a score of 0

-_- Long story short, I am not amused.

— nitrogalaxy on 4/5/2013 8:29:32 AM with a score of 0

Maybe it's the fact that I dislike bad future stories, but this story seemed pretty offensive. I mean, come on, "Colored house?

— rae38 on 4/5/2013 8:15:32 AM with a score of 0

I can't comprehend the story itself, so I checked on the background of it...

And I found out that you (VERY OSCURELY) tried to make a futuristic world where extremes are the norm.

Well, I like the concept, except for the fact that you totally bombed it with slamming "RAPE" in the reader's face. No sir-ree, no me gusta.

— Swiftstryker on 4/5/2013 1:21:56 AM with a score of 0

Writing was not bad, but I couldn't really understand what was going on most of the time

— Xt1000305 on 4/4/2013 11:28:38 PM with a score of 0

I get that this was satire(I hope) but I think you tried way too hard. You kept mentioning transgendered people every couple of pages and I got the feeling you were just trying to be as offensive as possible with the people you talked about just to have shock factor. Also, this game was so unrealistic that any attempt to pointing out flaws in our own society, or at least the one you live in, didn't even connect.

On the other hand, I do think the point of the game was too show that political correctness and things like it can be crazy even if the people backing it don't think so. A society shouldn't always be worried about always trying to make sure someones feeling don't get hurt and therefore everything they do should be "neutral", or "non offensive to all cultures, ethnicities, and/or religions". I get your point.

That, or I could completely be looking into something that isn't there and this was just some random game.

— JMgskills on 4/4/2013 3:41:46 PM with a score of 0

While I'm fairly certain others will dislike this story for various reasons, but I laughed.

Really needed to be longer and more fleshed out though.