Player Comments on Awesome

Not so awesome.

Hi,
I suggest you try to learn a lot more of the English language before you write another storygame.

Stunt this stunt that this game sucks 0/100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

Must you make a game just for the sake of making a game? Or did you just want the 10 points? I barely read any of the 10 sentences of text that was on there (at least those that I could actually read), because I knew that all I was going to read was junk. Try playing some of the other popular games and see what people like. Or, go with something original. And yes, there is a reason some things are left "original". This is one of those ideas that are better left alone.

WHAT KIND OF STUNT WAS IT?

I had to play it again after I saw my comment! I'm very sorry for all the words I spelt wrong, but I'm using my damn IPod touch screen for this!

Look, I ise the wrod awesome a lot too, but you realy need to have an awesome story before you can call it awesome. Try adding some backstory to your characters (or any story at all)! Also, have a link on every page. If you want, add me as a co-author and I'll try and help!

Somehow I feel Mr. Awesome is another account of EricDrewCents.

Specific reasons:
1- English is 3rd language of Eric and Mr. Awesome also.
2- In the story the guy named Drew; same name as of Eric full name.
3- Horrible grammar; (Eric=Mr)

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Awesome Does Not Approve!
Sorry, where are you from? Beause either:
1. You're from outside of here, or
2. You weren't there the week they taught English.
The story was also pretty linear, because what you had to do was never give up, obviously. Simple and dull, I'm sorry.
1/8.

English is my 3rd language that's why my english is not good .

Have proper english please

1/8

Okay, if this is supposed to be a parody of bad storygames, then you, good sir, have done a very good job.

However, if we're supposed to take this seriously, then I must say that you have failed, and utterly so.

I AM A HERO!
sSince i am only one, i give a one/eight. When i will be eight heroes, i'll give 8/8.

Not so bad ! ! !

2/8

It doesn't live up to its implication

Is English a second language?

:P

I got to the first page before I disliked it. You go back and forth in past and present tenses, you misspell words, and in general it didn't make sense.

This does not deserve to be called awesome.

This was not very awesome.

There weren't a lot of things going for this game, the only thing I noticed was that there were plenty of choices, but the rest was below average. The thing that stood out to me the most was the grammar. You really need to improve on that.

2/8

Spreading my cheeks.

Now that I've recovered from the sheer awesomeness, 1/8

Seconded. Was awesome. 8/8

AWESOME