"Too few ratings to be ranked"
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"wade in shark infested water"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.
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Yeah, what mizal said. It was a decent ~3 pages though.
on 3/16/2017 6:19:54 AM with a score of 0
I assume you're from the same class as the bee story guy. Again, the writing is decent compared to what we usually get when class projects pop up here. There are a few punctuation errors and some of the wording is a little awkward and amateurish, but I'm not sure how old you are.
The main issue is this is just too short. It ends just as its getting started and there isn't much branching.
Next time you do something for a school project, I'd recommend leaving the story unpublished in your profile, turning on sneak peek, and just giving the link to your teacher.
on 3/13/2017 10:28:04 PM with a score of 0
you are awesome!
on 3/2/2017 9:43:31 PM with a score of 0
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