Crescentstar, The Dramatist
Last Update: 12/17/17
ToS List: Pineapplekitty, Rivertail, Virtualide
Title of HONORARY SAGE presented to me by TharaApples
I'm still procrastinating so hard. T_T THE PAIN, OH, THE PAIN.
Secret Winter Story
Temple of the Fae
Notes for myself because I do not feel like opening notepad: Make it seem less like a maze, find a way to incorporate thoughts specific to an event and stuff, find those background papers
Ming Dynasty Story Updates Thread:
"you're fucking golden." - Steve24833
"Guided by my parents but raised by the internet." - Ford
"The protagonist is a slightly insane royal traversing through a slightly insane world with the help of none other than his new companion, a bear." - Orange, the Jewish bear that drinks orange juice
""I'm experiencing diminishing returns." - Me
"I refuse to partake in any of this. I am strictly neutral in this war." - Seto, the true Sage"
"As long as people stay out of my kicking range" - Me, in honor of a friend's suggestion
"It takes a monster to kill a monster." - Caleana Sardothien/Sarah J Mass (whichever you prefer); Heir of Fire
Thank you's: Thank you, Kiel's awesome partner generator—for that I'll be eternally grateful. Thank you, everyone who supported me. Thank you Shadow for everything. Thank you Set for being friendly to, like, everything and everyone.Thank you Raven for tolerating me.
This is my 2016 December Ballad Contest entry
Note: Any items are in the girl's inventory.
Also, this entry is quite short, but there are several endings.
Beware some of the things in here as they're quite... unfriendly.
To some, it's called the "Forgotten Holocaust of World War II". The atrocities committed in the Pacific theater of war during World War II are arguably the most inhumane and cruel acts done in all of human history.
Play as either Zhaoluo or Li, a pair of stepsisters, along with a touch of enemy perspective.
Endings: 3 Normal Epilogues, 2 Special Epilogue (an altered version of a normal epilogue due to at least one choice), 2 Normal Endings, 2 Death Endings.
1. I do not intend to discriminate against any group; I think that all types of people can be very nice and kind, and I'm writing in both sides' possible perspectives, so keep that in mind. Also keep in mind that the Japanese and Chinese had always had tensions between them, and their bias against the other can be very strong.
2. I've taken some creative liberties with the story, which include making up appearances for real people/characters and the lack of police officers and guards in the camp the protagonist resides in. It is historical fiction after all. Oh, and I'm pretty sure that some of the swear words I used don't really exist in Chinese, but my knowledge in that area is not too good.
3. Information found are on various sources listed at the end of the main path (the most boring path, of course).
4. Although much of it is optional, and because I can't write such things very well, there will be mentions and mild descriptions of violence, gore, rape/forced incest, decapitation/removal of body parts, and other dark subjects. Viewer discretion advised.
5. Update (1): Thanks you, StrykerL, for the critique. I've incorporated most of the tips. Future Updates (?): Extended paths, Hidesada Path.
Thanks to TharaApples for beta-reading. :D Also, I'd like to also mention Orange and MinnieKing for (keeping me entertained and) helping each other procrastinate during our time with all this: *gestures wildly*. Of course, for also shoving each other toward the finish line (he he). Oh, and Steve24833: Thanks for a few informational pointers and stuff. Thanks to the people who've given writing advice to me in my time here because they were very helpful.
If you notice anything wrong, incorrect, or otherwise... odd, please let me know! ^-^
Things from the past seem to come back to me. Beautiful memories of how all of us were so happy together. We would chat every day and strengthen our bonds everyday. It was summertime then, and the the light was so bright and lovely; it cast a warm glow on all of us, our auras were so bright. I would go to the length to say that I love them. I love them so much. They were the people I hold closest to my heart, and I cannot bear to ever lose them, to ever stop talking with them and sharing our lives with each other.
But... now. It's all gone. All ruined. I can't stand how these beautiful memories are so out of reach, so blurry and bleak. I can't stand how one of the people I say I love has changed so much... and for the worse. I can't stand how my friends have to leave, one after another, slowly and slowly. I can't stand watching them leave me. I can't stand it. It's breaking me slowly. I love them all; they are very dear to my heart. These people are some of the best friends I've ever had. But they're changed and gone... and I fear that they don't know how much I truly, truly love them.
Kyra Ross is a 15-year old commoner in a post-nuclear-devastation world where mutants (also called dark forces) are the main enemy to humanity. They are fought back with, what is in short, magic.
The enemy isn't these mutants however; the enemy is very human. And what happens when you're tangled up with a few boys that are very, very charming? What happens to you when your parents don't care about your mental well-being? What happens when your only noble friends are involved in a family war between each other?
What happens when you're a commoner stuck in a pit of nobles?
There isn't any "bad" stuff—nothing explicit or involving the murder of human beans. Unless you count itsy-bitsy descriptions of kisses.
I rushed the ending of my entry due to the deadline for the School-Based Contest, and I will edit it all (add more story and epilogues and do even more proofreading) after the contest.
Hope you like it! ^-^
Recent PostsDecember Contest on 12/17/2017 8:50:15 PM
Can we have un-coauthored beta readers?
Scratch and Scurry (contest WIP) on 12/17/2017 8:36:23 PM
Yay! :D *prepares some power food*
Ming Dynasty (December 2017 entry) on 12/17/2017 8:21:18 PM
:O Yay! I find this motivating. ^-^
New guy here. on 12/17/2017 8:04:10 PM
New guy here. on 12/17/2017 5:57:08 PM
Ming Dynasty (December 2017 entry) on 12/17/2017 5:44:11 PM
I am. Though I'm happy that WIBN thinks I could do it. :O
Orange's Fairy Tale on 12/17/2017 5:43:22 PM
Ahahaha. That's a very fairy-tale-y title
A REAL Motivation thread on 12/16/2017 10:49:02 PM
Ayy. Mizal got this. :D Just finish your December entry, mizal. ^-^
New guy here. on 12/16/2017 10:12:38 PM
Ming Dynasty (December 2017 entry) on 12/16/2017 9:47:04 PM