Player Comments on Coffee Break

It was alright! If you're looking for a quick little game to play then this is definitely for you! If you value a longer, more detailed story (possibly with more logic involved) then I wouldn't suggest this. For what it is, I enjoyed it!

poopie

This is why I always drink water.

I LOVED IT!! SO FUNNY

Really fun game! It had some suitably random happenings, which made it exciting to read!

i personally think that the game is pretty good....for a beginner. the game is short and kind of linear, but gives kind of a fun aspect. it's like coffee, strange enough. kind of good yet simple. the game's kind of jokey and fun. after all, "you decide life cannot go on without coffee"

Short but sweet! :)

Cheesy And I Hated It

8/8

Great game

It was humorous, but very short.

3/8

This was actually kind of humorous. A little goofy and somewhat obnoxious, but not bad for a short game. Good job.

it was fabulous just needs a few tweeks and it would be heaven!

I got 13/14 Endings..
Dishonest
Rebel
Worst
Bittersweet
Taco
Vengeance
Eternal
Disappointing
Satisfactory
Fair
Total Failure
Best
Stinky Ending,
what is the last one xd

it was kool

Funny.

I suppose this "coffee break" ideas simply emanates the idea of random things happening (That is how I justified the randomness of this storygame.) With that plus the humor? I found it quite the storygame.

However, the story lacks description and background information about the protagonist and setting. With more description, despite the shortness, this game could give someone a nice laugh. :)

Short and charming, with just the right mixture of wackiness and believability. (And my believability, I mean that's it's well-written enough to make me suspend my disbelief.)
This is one of the few stories here that's made me laugh out loud. A perfectly good way to kill a few minutes.

It was very short, and was not very descriptive. It was sort of bland as a story, and the humor was ruined by the poor plot. Keep going though.

Mildly entertaining. Not quite sure why Alex decided he needed to go and commit attempted homicide though.

Overall, I don't think there is enough of a plot development and some deaths are really sudden (Alex smashing a coffee pot over my head) and i would really like for it to branch off into different (A LOT DIFFERENT) endings.

I wish it had been longer, but pretty good story.

But I really actually don't like coffee why

Brilliantly made and full of humor! Multiple endings provides the reader with chances and leaves them thirsting for more. Well done!

Short and simplistic, but not bad. For your next story you should work on branching out more and fleshing out the plot.

Sweet. I got a job at a taco truck. Tacos!

Loved it! it was funny, but could've been longer.

It was, well decent. It was funny. I just wish there was more options to keep my job ha-ha

Short but funny. Wouldn't mind seeing more like this. It was surprising how many choices and endings you packed in; I don't even think I found them all but I consider the Taco Ending to be the canon one. I bet taco truck drivers can drink coffee whenever they want. :)

This is a pretty entertaining game, with a decent sense of humour to it. Could have done with a bit more substance to it though. A two sentence long page isn't really long enough for me.

Nice story, it's very well written and funny! :D