The Invasion of CYOA

Player Rating0/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on ratings since 01/18/2017
played 7 times (finished 0)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level6/8

"i'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.

It was a normal day on CYOA (Choose Your Own Adventure), when suddenly, aliens began inhaling all the text from the site! Can you stop the invasion!?

Small Update: Added Ford, Tim36D, and TCount parodies.

Player Comments

Pros:
-Semi-decent short story
-Almost moderately funny

Cons:
-No Tim

5/8.
-- Tim36D on 1/18/2017 11:24:08 PM with a score of 0
The choices of names could've certainly be better. :/ "Smeto" doesn't make much sense, though we know who it is. EndMonster and ThanaPeaches are better because they somehow relate to the original outside of name parodies.

There were a few grammar errors, but what really got to me was the tense changing. You 'said' things in past tense, then suddenly, he 'says' something in present tense.

The storygame wasn't very funny either. At least for me. Perhaps I'm just not excited by the random type of humor involved in the storygame, but in general, I felt that it was really thin. What they said was equivalent to somebody that keeps swearing thrice per sentence (well, not that annoying); there's no real meaning to it. It doesn't even attempt to help someone understand the site better.

While I'm simply not a fan of storygames like this, your writing is pretty good. :D Just need better names and a purpose, and it could be really good!
-- Crescentstar on 1/12/2017 10:41:09 PM with a score of 0
This was an attempt at a random humour game using obvious versions of well known members to attempt at the inside joke feel of other games in here.

Sadly despite using people's names, there was never really enough text to parody them properly and most of the names could be interchanged easily so it didn't really work in that aspect.

The game was also extreamly short and linear, when the choices didn't lead to instant loss they were just sending you back to the other choice anyway so it was a single path game. If you want to make a joke game using members names you have to remember that members change, many of the active members right now are new and will be replaced by other in a year or two so the humour has to not only parody them but also be funny for someone who doesn't recognise the names.
-- FeanorOnForge on 1/10/2017 2:09:19 PM with a score of 0
I liked it, it was creative and different. Also a good length.
-- Sierramist on 1/1/2017 10:56:08 AM with a score of 0
This game..... is too weird. It's quite short but overall writing seems fine. This story is quite good considering the fact that your computer was extremely laggy. It's too linear though and the only real choices were the 3 choices at the end of this extremely short story.
-- Plelb on 12/28/2016 10:19:36 AM with a score of 0
Fun story
-- CeruleanFlare on 12/24/2016 2:49:35 PM with a score of 0
Lol, this was awesome XD
-- B101 on 12/24/2016 3:42:19 AM with a score of 0
Haha, this game implies AlexP actually cares about this site.
-- betaband on 12/24/2016 12:24:59 AM with a score of 0
Cute, but it's really short, and the only actual choice is right at the end. And it's an 'immediately win or lose the game' kind of choice, at that.

And forget what Malk said about Thrilla_Robot...what the heck is alexp doing around at all, let alone hanging out with scrubs on the Lounge?

Also I...I don't think you can take over the coding of the site from a storygame. Not even on THIS site.
-- mizal on 12/23/2016 12:18:30 PM with a score of 0
Well, there was no branching and it was insanely short, which sucked. Despite you changing names you didn't seem to actually parody anyone, which would've been funny, but instead they were just kind of their as placeholders. The plot was ridiculous but not in a fun way like "Cows vs Aliens" or something. Also, you can't unban, which was a pretty essential plot point. All in all, pretty weak.
-- Steve24833 on 12/23/2016 12:05:59 PM with a score of 0
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