Love & Dating
"Too few ratings to be ranked"
played times (finished )
"walk in the park"
"Make sure not to blink"
"choking hazard for children under 4"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.
a game about a wolf's search for a mate (it probably sucks but....try to play anyway?)
This is an unpublished story by an author who hasn't even logged in in six years, why are people playing it still?
on 5/22/2019 7:33:55 PM with a score of 0
Pretty good, could be better
-- Person on 5/22/2019 7:07:52 PM with a score of 0
i like thise
-- atraeu on 5/13/2019 1:10:07 AM with a score of 0
It's not very good. Punctuation and grammatical errors litter this thing like trash on the side of a road.
I liked it, it was sweet, but it could definitely use some work!
on 5/9/2019 7:15:02 PM with a score of 0
It was nice and all but no matter what path you picked its just the same thing but a different wolf and different environment. It's a great story and has lots of potential but it needs different things to happen and needs to be longer. I'm not saying that I want it to be 10,000 pages long though. Its just that I can probably finish in about 5 or 6 clicks. I'm not too much of a good writer myself but even I think that this has plenty of room for improvement.
Wow! You actually bothered to read this? Good job!
-- A random melon on 6/20/2018 7:02:47 AM with a score of 0
l like wolf
-- snow on 6/13/2018 10:22:01 AM with a score of 0
Its a really sweet game
-- Moon on 4/17/2018 2:20:31 PM with a score of 0
I love this! Please add more! Also you should make one were there are horses!
-- Ashlynn on 5/27/2017 7:31:39 PM with a score of 0
It was certainly short and sweet. I got Snow as my mate. I wish you could actualy raise your pups, and their were more defined choices, but over-all very well done. Please make it longer, or at least make a sequel.
-- Chickdove on 12/23/2016 11:24:06 AM with a score of 0
Okay, there were many, MANY errors in this story. I saw many words that weren't even capitalized, and spots where there should've been some kind of punctuation. Also, this story was awfully short. I got through it in maybe five clicks, and that's not a good thing.
The writing does have potential. Add more description to each page, maybe. And go through your story to find mistakes before you publish it, because there were a lot. 1/8.
on 12/22/2016 12:46:56 AM with a score of 0
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