Player Comments on Mercer Gang Returns

MERCER GANG!

— Yummyfood on 1/30/2026 4:06:49 AM with a score of 0

MERCER GANG!

— Chris113022 on 1/30/2026 3:12:51 AM with a score of 0

"Are you ready for your writing lessons?"

Zane Grey gulps.

Louis L'Amour breathes heavily.

Cormac McCarthy nods nervously.

Charles Portis sighs.

"Yes, NeonCatYT," they say in unison.

— Mousecore on 1/14/2026 10:53:47 PM with a score of 0

Doesn't seem to have gathered the viral energy of the first one, you might have to learn actual grammar at this point I'm sorry to say.

— SpecialOlympic on 1/4/2026 7:58:35 AM with a score of 0

Sigh. Mercer Gang!

— Liminal on 12/23/2025 11:22:17 PM with a score of 0

Mercer Gang!

— Ogre11 on 12/21/2025 12:33:05 PM with a score of 0

Can you add more choices but it was story with good imagetion please more

— Footballfan45 on 12/21/2025 11:57:26 AM with a score of 0

I like stories like this the grammar is ok can you do a horror like zombies and werewolf

— Kingorqueen32 on 12/21/2025 11:54:51 AM with a score of 0

I love the story mate can you do more like this

— Peppermint55 on 12/21/2025 11:52:01 AM with a score of 0

Awesome story another story like this please

— MudCat on 12/21/2025 11:49:15 AM with a score of 0

There is at least 3 SPAG issues per page. I'm reading Blood Meridian right now, and I can't help but feel as if the author was influenced by the style of the writing, especially with the choice of no punctuation, and wild-west influenced.

However overall, this was somewhat for a hard read for me.