4/22/2025

11/22/2025 7:34 PM

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10 wins / 5 losses

Marauder

#Clankersagainstpedophilia

PLEASE LET ME JOIN!!! (This is a really cool thread and I'd like to take part ^-^)

So long as it’s to stop him from continuing his idiotic rampage.

Awwww Harper learned a new word to use in every shitpost! Stop spamming and using AI, faggot. Also some helpful advice you don't deserve: STOP DOXXING YOURSELF! People on the internet are dangerous, and even if I literally hate your annoying ass shitposts and general stupidity, some people might take it too far.

Stream of thought reviewing: let's go.

A: Some sentences, even within the first few paragraphs, made no sense. I overall just had a difficult time keeping up with this story, although that may also be attributed to my weekend-long migraine. I like the part where the child dies, though. I'm sure there's a great story in this, but my eyes kept glazing over and my head just kept pounding. I'd give this a 4/8.

B: The spacing looks like either a five year old did it, or like I did it when I was twelve. I actually am hooked on this story pretty much immediately. I also get the strong sense that Avo wrote this. But, I have been embarrasingly wrong in guessing who writes which stories in the past, so I'll block it out. About halfway through the story, and I have a VERY strong sense this was Avo, from the attempts to sound mature and the asterisks as paragraph breakers. Nearly finished with the story. If this is anyone OTHER than Avo, you write like a twelve year old girl. There's a lot of lore-dumping and rudimentary ideas that just remind me of Avo during the mafia game or the roleplaying thread, such as pulling signs out of nowhere or naming a concept. For a young writer, this is crucial, and honestly, it's kind of fun to read a story that could have just been written by a younger me. Not saying I'm much better at this point in time or anything- in fact, I'm probably about the same, but it's nice regardless.
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Sudden plot-twist self insert.
Okay Avo, wrap it up.
For making me cringe so unfathomably hard, I'm deducting 3 points from the score I would've given you. Jesus Christ, I'm in pain. Never in my life have I wanted a time machine to go back and smack my younger self in the head this hard. It hurts so much because had I found CYS at 12, I would've done the same. Did... Did you just, not have enough words to finish, Avo? I'm actively crying.
1/8.

C:
Well, can't be worse than story B.
I actually am hooked on this one.
The usage of random SAT terminology such as 'helter skelter' 'exodus' and 'gesticulate' are fun, but they don't take me out of the writing too much, which I appreciate.
I forgot to actually say anything for most of this, I was so invested. As a French-American, though, I was like "Hey, isn't Boulangerie a bakery?" and after a quick google search, I was correct. That made me google Titou, which I did not recognize, but google said it was a french nickname for Antoine, so in english our MC would be known as 'Little Anthony,' or more likely, "Little Tony.' I just found that adorable, that we have 'Mister Bread-Baker' and 'Little Tony.' Anyway, I loved this story deeply. I docked a point for not following the prompt until the end, but I do think this is one of the best thunderdome stories I've read.
7/8

tl;dr, Story C.

I'd like to donate 270 points to RK, because he overpaid me and seems to be... Throwing his points at the Wardens. Hm. Well, they've made it clear they don't want it. Except Enter. I will donate one singular point to Enter specifically, because he said he'd take them.

Wow! Great issue, everyone. I'd love to take part in secret santa!

Thanks Sherbet!

DO SOME WORK MIZAL. DON’T BE LIKE A NOOB. IF YOU DON’T DO WORK YOUR ENTIRE FAMILY IS GONNA DIE. (hey can someone yell at me too please?)

That is who I was addressing. But congratulations to them for figuring it out so soon!