Player Comments on Zombie Crisis

Decent enough story, I like the rather blasé way the reader's character casually accepts the destruction of civilization and the likely deaths of all his friends and family. The tried and trusted formula is there, a touch more character depth in your next work would help it stand out a little more, enjoyable enough stuff though.

Lacks real plot and has all the cliches of the typical zombie game. The grammar is acceptable, and the story shows that you've got promise as a writer. But for now, formulating new and original ideas is where things can be improved.

Too short, not reasonable, and awful grammar and spelling. Proofreading isn't hard.

Eh. Decent. Better than some I've seen, at least.

It's good, but a little short. I suggest you watch some THE WALKING DEAD for ideas.
But impressive!

Story is too short, you can't really get much out of it. If expanded, could become something worth of your time to play.

Much like Survive the Zombies

Momma's recipe...

Will's right, you could've added background into the characters. I also like the way the player's reaction to the zombie news is like the way Shaun did. (in the movie)

Anyway, I still see potential for you to improve. Make your next stories longer, make more ways to draw readers, etc.

But until you improve, however, your stories will remain as boredom. 3/8

A bit short to be honest. On the other hand i like the writing style. Could be a bit more stuffed with infos/lore/surrounding.

jk dude this game was awesome! ignore my dark side :)

it was so short if the author had made it longer than it would be a wonderful story but it just needs to be longer

TOO SHORT it has good material, and could make an amazing story, but... still it's too short plz make it longer

Pleasant enough. Way too short! Some spelling issues. Fix those things and add some more action and I bet the rating will go up.

Good but only 2 surviving endings :(

Good but short.

Very short and leaves you at a cliff hanger
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I gotta tell you, JiJi, shortness mixed with cliché is a very deadly combination. With nothing to get your story away from the pack, it'll be boring and not fun to play. Unfortunately, that's kinda what happened here.

If you went a little more in depth with this and also added a bit of a twist, you could have a really good story game on your hands. Also, why would anyone's first source of info about the apocalypse be Facebook? Just sayin'.

too short.

its short

Good writing and grammar, though it is a bit too cliffhangy and short. Make #2

Good writing and grammar, though it is a bit too cliffhangy and short. Make #2

There should be a second one or just expand this one. I got the win ending but I want to know what is next.

A fun, if short, story game. Plenty of choice and realistic play through. Cliche plot line and very short.

Plenty of branches, but slightly unoriginal. 5/8.

What was there was decent, it was just very short. I' sure you could write a really good story game if you make it a lot longer and put more effort into the plot and characters.

All you need is time to build a good story...

Far too generic, I wanted to see something special!

Spelling, grammar and base structure are certainly decent, but the story lacks any Unique Selling Point, to put it into business terms.

If this was made longer with branching out and a lot less clichés, you could make a truly wonderful story for us.

EarthCollision, quit it. As a zombie choose your story game, it was alright. The problem I had with it was that zombies take over, you try to survive, and not much else is added onto that. Nothing makes it really stand out from the rest of the zombie story games out there. Other than that, I appreciate the effort that was put into it, which I can't say the same for many of the newer story games on this site.

It's ok, but short.