Player Comments on A Pretty Boring Explanation

Hey Yellow,
I gave this one a 1/8 because obviously it doesn't meet site standards and it isn't even a proper storygame. But I'm not here to browbeat you or explain where you went wrong.

As long as you keep trying to work on your skills and you keep writing, you're an author! Don't lose hope or feel discouraged about how your game was received. Every author you see on here has received negative comments on their writing that brought them down. But they dusted themselves off, considered the criticism offered, and got back up. Don't stay down.

You will make a good storygame. if you need help or ideas, post in the forums! This isn't really the right place to put things like this, so I would just recommend that you keep trying to make a better game than before.

Good luck! I believe in you!

One point for me.

Decided to read a story today. Hopped on and saw this was recently published. A mostly useless "story" if you would even call it that.

Like Mizal said. Forums exist, Yellow.

Holy shit dude, the forum exists for a reason.