Player Comments on Avoiding Termination
Spoiler-free review
This game is surprisingly good at first impressions. It quickly pulls you in with a promise of a satirical slice-of-life adventure full of fun and unexpected twists, and it doesn’t at any point lie by making that promise. Unfortunately despite what some people say first impressions aren’t quite everything, and despite its best attempts the deeper into Avoiding Termination the reader gets, the flatter its story falls.
It doesn’t however change the fact that the creative foundations of this storygame are solid. The basic premise of being a fresh graduate starting his journey as the other member of this educational tango offers plenty of opportunities for entertaining events along the way, and the author definitely makes full use of it. This creativity is somewhat stifled by more technical aspects however. Narration, while by no means bad, feels barebones for most of the game, only providing the necessities in terms of worldbuilding and characterization. This problem does extend to characters, who while varied and distinct feel quite one dimensional for most of the story with some exceptions.
The protagonist is similarly basic, but thanks to the significant amount of choices present in the story and their frequency it’s easy to overlook it and instead treat him as a blank canvas for the reader to paint on as they wish. Those choices are definitely the strongest aspect of the game, especially thanks to the unpredictability of their results. There’s a solid mix of branching, false choices and bad ends sprinkled across the story. As you play there’s often no way to tell which choice opens up a completely new path that shines a new light on some characters and which will goes straight to an early game over screen, and the few times your decisions will result in the most obvious of outcomes it still feels fresh due to those results being only part of the cake.
Despite those positives however there are times when the game feels lacking in content, and overall doesn’t quite give the impression of being as long as the word count suggests. This is another blemish resulting from sparse narration and worldbuilding, which might not outright hurt the story itself, but this lack of depth feels like a waste considering that a little bit of extra color could easily make the linework pop.
As it currently stands Avoiding Termination is a decent enough piece of creative work that’s held back from being a true gem by the regretful lack of polish past the first draft, but even in its rough state there’s some good fun to be had navigating the maze of social situations it weaves in front of the reader.
Final score: 5/8
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CavusRex
on 6/18/2025 7:35:42 AM with a score of 0
I enjoyed the premise, although more interaction with characters, and a longer story with more teaching decisions would've been nice.
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benholman44
on 5/15/2024 2:58:17 PM with a score of 0
It's really not that bad ...I love the multiple affairs it has
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Masamithe1st
on 2/28/2024 4:25:47 AM with a score of 0
The ending I got was "The Romantic." Was there ever any doubt?
Cool story. Easy to read and good pacing. Well worth it.
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— Banjo on 9/13/2021 7:38:05 PM with a score of 0
This story was a lot of fun to read
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Aldreda
on 5/21/2021 11:48:58 AM with a score of 0
awwwwwwwwww Celeste is so wholesome
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— Witch on 2/10/2020 3:37:35 AM with a score of 0
This is a very flawed game. Its choices don't branch out much and its writing is bland, but somehow I found myself enjoying it. My main problem with this game is it's writing and the length. The characters have no time to be fleshed-out due to short length, the story is bland, choices loop back to each other constantly, etc. I feel the writer could have made this game perfect if he/she simply put more effort into branching out the choices and made a longer game so the characters could shine more.
My final verdict is a 5 out of 8. It's fun thankfully, but it needs some improvement.
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ReadyStories
on 1/3/2020 1:34:58 AM with a score of 0
Super fun! I like how many choices are in the story. The “flirting” was terrible though xD super cheesy
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— Dogwhispered on 2/16/2019 8:14:08 PM with a score of 0
I like all the different endings. Good work!
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TeamLeoValdez
on 3/16/2018 12:57:54 AM with a score of 0
I possibly got a short story, but it was incredibly small. It could also use some more details but it had an ok idea. The story dose deviate.
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warfthecat
on 11/12/2017 4:25:28 PM with a score of 0
Despite not having much plot to speak of, it was pretty great! Flirting with my fellow teachers was hilarious!
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Griseo
on 11/5/2017 4:03:26 PM with a score of 0
Well, it was alright. It lost my attention after some time since it was a bit boring. Anyways, you should have added some more humour, and made it more detailed. Otherwise, it is a somewhat interesting read. It's not the best, but it isn't the worst either.
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DiniTheWizard
on 11/4/2017 11:17:43 PM with a score of 0
Absolutely terrible
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— Dieg on 11/4/2017 2:47:10 PM with a score of 0
This was definitely enjoyable! I got a good ending my first go-around, but the thing about this is... It's just so short. Main characters that you introduced were interesting enough, and development was acceptable. Though this game has many diverging paths, and multiple endings, it doesn't deliver a really good story.
The grammar was pretty good, except for some questionable parts where you missed a word, but from my read-through plural, I didn't notice any misspelled words, so that's good.
In the beginning of the game, it was quite obvious and evident that we were meant to go to ONE school, and not three, which would have made for a very diverse and interesting game.
I really liked your Jaxon character, and I did my best to befriend him, as it was also pretty obvious he was dubbed the 'trouble maker' from a bad home life. Regardless of several obvious cliches in the game, it was enjoyable, and I hope to read more like this.
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Comic
on 8/30/2017 5:25:56 PM with a score of 0
Enjoyable. Punctuation issues make the reading a little difficult at times. Misleading - your choice may be what you would do, but the words the creator chose might be way over the top.
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Quorrah
on 12/24/2016 2:31:25 PM with a score of 0
Meh it was ok
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CeruleanFlare
on 12/13/2016 11:27:27 PM with a score of 0
Decent game. Like others have pointed out, it was a bit lacking in substance, but the plot was clear from the start, and the endings gave a satisfying conclusion.
Not too much else to say on it really.
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Killa_Robot
on 7/17/2016 8:13:08 PM with a score of 0
Oakwood is the only school you can apply to.
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dragon396
on 7/12/2016 10:08:43 PM with a score of 0
This felt like the bare bones of an amusing tale. Longer, more detailed pages would have done wonders. I like the sense of humor, I almost chuckled into my fist once but I managed to stop myself before it escaped.
Overall well done. You've inspired me with the path where you accidentally become a janitor; a janitor would be an interesting protagonist.
Nice story.
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donteatpoop
on 7/7/2016 2:45:45 AM with a score of 0
I was really engrossed in the beginning, but some of the blatantly rushed endings were kind of disappointing.
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Crescentstar
on 7/7/2016 1:43:58 AM with a score of 0
Great job. I knew you could do it.
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MasonJarGuzzi
on 7/3/2016 10:17:24 PM with a score of 0
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