Aldreda, The Contributor
9/17/2021 9:35 AM
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I'm here to read and make stories That's all you need to know, Currently working on "The Lost Island" and "Not to be Seen"
FERAL Files Chapter 1: Not to be Seen (Overhaul)
FERAL Files Chapter 2: The Lost Island
After discovering strange energy pulse's emitting from a place off the Alaskan coast a team of scientists set out to investigate. What they discover changes their understanding of the modern world...
Recent PostsBattle of the Joes on 9/17/2021 9:32:19 AM
I vote story 1
Manifest Destiny Contest Results on 9/10/2021 9:50:08 AM
Manifest Destiny Reader's Guide on 9/7/2021 1:21:54 PM
Can't wait to see the final results!
Shut The Fuck Up, Noobtards on 9/7/2021 1:15:07 PM
The noobs who have been talking on the forums I think
Shut The Fuck Up, Noobtards on 9/7/2021 1:14:07 PM
End master is Endmaster
End Master's Manifest Destiny Contest on 9/7/2021 12:02:33 PM
I was wondering why there were so many storygames being published, now I know.
Asking for Beta readers on 9/1/2021 8:05:55 PM
Thank you for such a long and detailed review! and I would absolutely love to see your thoughts once I put in your suggested changes. For your final question this story is gonna have minor choices scattered around that help change the final ending of the story.
Asking for Beta readers on 9/1/2021 3:57:54 PM
Does this work? https://chooseyourstory.com/story/feral-files-chapter-1~3a-the-lost-island
Asking for Beta readers on 9/1/2021 3:56:04 PM
I'm not sure how to do that :/
Asking for Beta readers on 9/1/2021 3:35:18 PM
Looking for Beta readers for my story "FERAL Files Chapter 1: The Lost Island" This story is unfinished right now but I still wanted to see what mistakes other people may find and their first impressions of what I have so far. I'm looking for advice on technical stuff, the characters, the story so far and especially grammar since I suspect there's a lot of mistakes I can't see.