Player Comments on Football dream

Written way too quickly.

Whom ever voted "good...for you to poop on" was mistaken. It's way less.

This just took me 5 seconds to finish.

Literally took me 8 seconds and 50 milliseconds. Great job, you made someone pissed.

This is as much a story as football is a respectable sport. 1/8.

This entire thing reads like someone describing a very bare bones outline for a story idea they had. The story itself never makes an appearance at any point.

Finished in less than a minute. Probably written in less than 10.

I don't know how you can have a realistic story about being a football star and not have the option to brutally stab your wife to death.

Hell, even the option of knocking her out in an elevator would have been acceptable.

Easiest free point ever.

:P You need a good, catchy PLOT. Plus you need to write more and choose more for the reader. Good for a first story

Don't rate your own game. You put some effort into this but the story didn't seem to be very well planned out or thought through... I know nothing about American Football except that it's like rugby in armour but I'm sure there are more choices, challenges, conundrums, catalysmic catastrophes and other things that begin with "c" than are depicted in your story :)

This was terrible.

Maybe don't rate your own game, asshole.

It's good

This had potential, but it seemed rushed, grammar wasn't all there, and I liked how I had the choice at the beginning to not do football.
1/8

This is the best game ever
I really liked the storey line
I recomend ??????????

It was too short, the choices were too generic and useless and there was no descriptors, no characters, nothing that makes a good story.

Great story. Many twists and turns. Maybe a little longer but overall it was amazing.