Player Comments on Giants!

This is a nice story. It's good for all ages.

It was alright.

3/8

"Head to bed
You are very exhausted from your day, so you fall asleep right away. In the morning you got up and went downstairs to the kitchen to see what Edna made for breakfast. She made homemade pancakes. You sit at the table and she gives you a plate. As your eating you talk about what your going to do today. Edna just going to stay home and clean since its Saturday and there's nothing else to do. You are going to see what everybody is doing around town. "May I stay with you, because I don't have anywhere to go." you ask. "Of course you can.'' she said. Ever since that day everyone lived nice happy lives, and no one was ever above 10 feet tall again. Except for the one guy that wanted to stay a giant.
The End"

Yeah, nice story, i sure would love to max size donuts to the size of 'giant.' ;) But hey... too short, how about a sequel? =)

I think the story is decent, but you could make it more elaborate, flesh out the backstory for the world the story takes place in, add some culture.
Found it enjoyable. 5/8

it was fun

Um. 10 clicks. Not bad?

How on earth does this have a four?

A good first time attempt. Lots of grammar errors and some spelling mistakes. There were a few places were things need some more explanation or worded better such as the page where you tell the old lady your story and then your choices are yes or no but you don't know what you are saying yes or no to. but all in all a good first time children's story.

That was pretty bad. Grammar was poor, paragraphs would cut off at random



points, and the story lacked detail and crucial information to help the reader understand what was happening. I'm going to give this a 2/8. Hopefully you will improve overtime. Just keep at it, you'll get there!