Player Comments on HAUNTED HOUR!!!!
It reminds me of randomly generated poetry- where you give a computer a template of sentences and a bunch of words to draw from and see what combinations it comes up with.
on 9/5/2015 10:56:04 AM with a score of 0
No offense, but I don't enjoy this. This is more of a poem-based storygame, and I don't fancy poems fulfilling as a story.
on 9/4/2015 12:28:02 PM with a score of 0
Well done! Your poetry was exquisite and it made the story exiting. I love this!
on 9/2/2015 6:55:06 PM with a score of 0
A very very good poem.I loved it very very much.that rhyming words,rhythm etc excellent.
But a little short !! I am waiting for haunted hour part 2
— sam on 9/2/2015 2:15:10 AM with a score of 0
... I enjoyed this poem more I think than I've enjoyed any poem in a long time. Utterly unburdened by rhyme or rhythm you have used the English language in a way that few have ever dared to dream of before and I hope the sequel is written in the exact same style. I enjoyed almost every line of poetry but these were my favourite:
Fear with sheer and away with away
With a facefull of smile which you make
She wished you happy birthday
And gave the cake to to cut Anyway
Your mother has turned into a ghostly gesture
Escape from the bladey nails
But what about the devils prevail!!!!
You have your inner feelings
But no time to think in this innings
Once again the luck is by your side
The nails pierce your shirts precise
Thanks again for sharing this unique masterpiece :)
on 9/2/2015 1:14:12 AM with a score of 0
I can see a lot of potential for this story but, you need to fix some of your errors and expand on your ideas
on 9/2/2015 12:30:16 AM with a score of 0
I like how this is written but needs to be longer
on 9/1/2015 3:29:20 PM with a score of 0