Player Comments on Jokestar! With Vines!

THE BEST THINGY EVER!

THIS IS a-MAZE-ing! Any ways, I said this was joke so shut up those idiots being meanies. *Sniff Sniff*

Vines:
So, already I know that this is either going to be absolutely genius or completely fucking stupid...

9+10:
Oh god, not this shit... It's going to be one of those lolrandom, "look, I know what's going on on the internet and shit" things that I was hoping died out in 2007. At least 2007 used adorable rage comic faces!

John Cena and an unoriginal Yo Mama joke, nearly one right after the other:

Well, you can come up with ridiculous unfunny vine comedy, so I'll bring in some ridiculous unfunny memes, then!
I was going to give this story a 2/8... AAAAAAAaand the other point's gone. If you could focus on improving the quality of your work and removing the 'Lolrandom' aspects, that'd be great.

I did not find this funny. if you do, then ... well, lucky you, you find everything funny.

not funny enough i only smiled... :)

I'm sorry, I didn't laugh. Its just not funny. But keep trying anyway! Maybe if you search up online other funny things, and keep testing them out on here. If a lot of people laugh, you can find a bunch of similar jokes like that one and then it will make people go crazy! Find what ppl like :3

I think this sort of over-hyped stand up comic thing would work better if you gave the reader a choice of retorts so it didn't just feel like we were being abused by low grade humour (Yo Mama jokes aren't quite Oscar Wilde now are they?), the level of enthusiasm is good but it came across like those enthusiastic door to door salesmen who say things like "this carpet cleaner will change your life!"

Get some stronger material together, include more of it and this could be pretty funny: the idea is a good one :)