Player Comments on Melanie in Medan

This looks like it was thought out in less than 5 minutes.

This story was good, but it needs more choices.

Fastest game I've ever played!

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What?

I don't see why you ever bothered to write this.
"You became friends with Yuzu. YaaaY!"

Poor, short, not entertaining. It just seems to lack the basics of a story game, or a story really at all? Needs a heavy amount of work.

Way too short and I'm not even referring to page count, I mean page content.

I like the encouragements to be open-minded but it was too short. Don't forget being friends at school/college includes the whole spectrum of cinema, bowling, restaurants, house parties, love interests, social groups etc so this could have been developed a lot more. The writing was good but shortness was it's main problem :)

Not bad for a first effort. But it only takes three minutes to run through all four branches.