Player Comments on Messed up adventures 2: Weekly Bugle

This is being taken down for low ratings, much like the other ones. I hope your relationship with the community isn't going to be one of just repeatedly wasting our time and your own with things that even you admit are pretty bad.

Take some time to read a few storygames on the site and particularly some actual books before you go back to writing, and try something with a bit more care for the details and an actual planned plot. You could write things that are a lot more appreciated and surprise even yourself with how good it could be if you set a higher bar to really challenge yourself to improve.

Color me surprised, this author is a Warden.

please consider at least a horrible plotted storygame next time

Lol fag

The first one had a certain naive charm, this one seems to be annoying on purpose.

Weekly bugle? Ok, I had to google that to double-check that meant what I thought it meant and yep, a bugle is a small brass instrument. I assume that means I have weekly bugle practice blowing cavalry charges? I don’t eat anything and die of hunger so thanks for the point (it’s not a sign that the writer has much confidence in their game when they put an endgame link on the second page). I’m not sure why you made a second one, it’s not exactly back by popular demand is it? From the 2 pages I did read you seem to be sticking the lolrandom theme pretty strongly because it worked so well on the last story (which I think might have been an improvement on this one)? Not much else to say. This will probably get taken down pretty soon but let’s let everyone grab an easy point first.