Player Comments on minecraft adventure village

This... This is why no one likes the Minecraft community. Thanks for the free point, though.

So... BAD! This could not have possibly took more than 10 minutes to make. I really hope you're trolling

10/10 MASTERPIECE WOULD PLAY 50000000000 TIMES OVER

Needs more of a plot then "go to plains." and "you die." This is barely any good material. Please, take more than 5 minutes to write a story.

It seems silly to put more time and thought into writing a review than this kid did into writing their entire story...and yet, I've already done so.

.....no.

"The End in the End. HAHAHA. GET IT?"

._.

This could have literally been put together in less than an hour. There is no plot, many grammar mistakes, and choices that loop around without any actual ending. As the rating states, stay far, far away.

I run out of food when I obviously got food at the village. Okay then.
The grammar is also horrible, and there really is no plot or any characters here. Not even my own character was developed enough. I know nothing about the person I play as, or the realm I'm in, so that's always a giant minus. The length of the pages is relatively low too. This took me five minutes to play, and it probably took you ten minutes to make. Plus a few hours of a "well-earned break," I guess.
1/8. Pls learn grammar and plot development before you write a story.

According to your profile, you made this in one day.

I'd definitely suggest putting time, and your best effort into every storygame you do. Putting zero time and effort into things, won't get you anywhere.

Reaction, page by page:

Page 1- I'm two words in and I already want to leave.
Page 2- There's no item...? So it's not very useful at all!
Page 3- I'm in the woods, hunting with a bow. That's, uh, not very helpful.
Page 4- I killed it. I'm going to cook it because only sushi is really eaten raw.
Page 5- I'm in a forest already, I can cut down a tree in three seconds. Can somebody get him the cane?
Page 6- I've tried to kill the creeper and it's just death. Why couldn't the game left me win?
Page 7(which is End Game)- ....No.

Sin count: 35
Final verdict: Death by creeper

((I should do sin counts.))

1/8. 10/10 would burn again

Okay then...

Hmmm... no. No, don't do this.