Player Comments on Night is Falling

i didn't get the point of this

Run like hell is a new page...

Sorry, but three pages in I got a dead end. 4/8 cuz I`m feeling generous

Pretty nice and better than Lemon Simulator. I wish the ending was a bit more satisfying though, not a fan of ... . Gud lck kn your otha storaz...

I have fixed the "Nope! Nope nope! My ass is getting out of here!" Link, it now leads back to the river. Thankyou for informing me ^-^

Also adding to the "missing link" problem,Next to proceed quietly it says "Nope,nope I'm getting my butt out of here" or something like that.It is a dead end too.

A fun way to spend a couple minutes. You could expand more on the various monsters to make the story scarier and also add in a bit more description on what the character is feeling. If the character is scared, it makes the reader more afraid as well. There was a page you hadn't finished, something about "Proceed quietly". Also the circling choices can sometimes be annoying, but you seemed to have a reasonable handle on them and they made sense in the story. Good job, 4/8.

Good fun, good writing and a good time-killer :) It'd be cool to know more about the woods, the things in them and maybe have some extra characters along with me (so they can get killed instead of me). I enjoyed this though :D