Player Comments on Olivia
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Chris113022
on 5/30/2022 11:48:42 PM with a score of 0
I'd really recommend looking at some of the other games on the site before publishing another "mistery" story, there is no way this one will get high enough ratings to stay published I'm afraid.
Try writing something about six times longer, and making sure you spell check thoroughly for the next one.
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Mizal
on 5/30/2022 1:20:50 AM with a score of 0
Olivia, I hope you no longer livia
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WizzyCat
on 5/29/2022 6:05:23 PM with a score of 0
So I don't know how you planned to write a mystery in fewer than 500 words, but this ain't very good. Nor does it make too much sense. And clicking on the "mark is acting too strange" leads me back to the page where I don't "answer the phone".
Expand this (by a lot) and make an actual mystery that doesn't get "solved" in less time than it takes me to jerk off, and we may get somewhere.
Also this bit was unintentionally hilarious:
>I found the body and declared that she unfortunately died by murder.
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Celicni
on 5/29/2022 5:45:11 PM with a score of 0
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