Player Comments on Pooba monster

I'm pretty sure fanticy adventure only means you fight with swords and bows and stuff, not with guns and grenades

Poorly written, random, excess of exclamation points.
Pretty bad game

don't insult people in your game(s). it makes people go grr at you later on. ]:[

stap rytin lyk this is carp. <- DO NOT write like the phrase over there. It looks really dumb.

Dont type da way ya did in dis gam!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(yes, I typed like that on purpose)

Ugh!

Poorly written. Too many exclamation marks (!) and it's too easy to die.

I can't think of anything good to say, sadly. Too much needed to bother making suggestions, short of the fact that you should never, ever, use so many exclamation points.

THIS SUCKS MAGOR EVERYTHING. LEARN TO WRITE!

wat is the point of that game i didnt like it at all

it should have better pictures. it should have animations

well, the story was a little longer than i remember last time. but the grammar is still horrible. i once made a point that language wasnt the worst problem on the site but this is destroying that totally. clean up the grammar problems. but overall, looking better than what i last saw.

To many !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A little short, too ... put in more words.

have to unpublish this. it's not finished.

this aint finished man. unpublish and finish it.

Finish quickly so I can judge this crappy game at full extent. Sorry, but background info. is as necessary as... endings (which I am horrified to say there isn't enough).