Player Comments on Pushing A Desert Army

I have to agree with some of the other comments. You need details and a storyline. Where are we exactly? I thought we are on a desert island, but all of a sudden there is a castle. Maybe if you tell us what is going on, like what the war or battle is about and why people are fighting, then maybe I wouldn't be so confused. The person in the story probably has some motive for fighting- give some background and tell his story.

I generally write more than the 948 words of this game on most days and I'm surprised it even counts as a 3/8 for length to be honest. This 'story' was so short, undeveloped, and pointless that I don't really see why you published it. I think you need to put in more effort before you publish anything like this. Who's the main character? Why are you even in the desert and who are you fighting? None of this is explored and it all just seems like an excuse to have some barely written action crammed into less than a 1000 words for the sake of action.
1/8 Poor effort

It could use more detail

Psychosis....cool story line, needs more development though

I feel that this game was not explained very well. It was short and ended abruptly...

Terrible. What's the point?

I can understand your effort, since this was made in 2005. But this is crappy.

It's good, but a little bit short

Seth says MEH! A lot of ways to die but it was still sorta fun. 4/8

Not that bad... abit more detail would have been appreciated.

Bad writing, I don't even know what's going on more than half the time

Ok?

Really confusing. I didn't know what was happening most of the time. What really would have helped is if you explained some things before rushing into the story.

2/8

Really confusing :) (aka Waffles)

I didn't like it at all

Just not enough descripition. Most of the time i didn't have a clue where I was!

I think there should be a storyline, but other than that it was adeqaute

good

Played it again. I'm in a better mood. No real storyline but you put a whole lot of effort into this storygame. Well done.

sorry about the last rating. I have played the thing through and it is a 6/8!

Details, details. Also, do not say "you made the wrong choice". EVER.

Like madglee said, I believe descriptions of some of the weapons, etc., in the story should be provided.

No real storyline.

Not too bad. I have no idea what a "push" is, this should be explained. Also, the story is too linear and short. Would be nice to have a description of an AR34 and some of the other guns for those less militaristically inclined.

Hopefully the second one is better. I found out that I don't like games that END IN THREE PAGES, IF YOU PICK ONE OF TWO, SEEMINGLY EQUAL PAGES. L-i-n-e-a-r. 3/8, make it better!

good story, but very linear. dont have a continuation link and an dead link only. have multiple paths. but keep up the good work.

That was pretty cool. I liked it.

If you were to make this an advanced game, add detail, cahnge the title, and make it unlinear you would of made this an excellent game. It is still a good game though. 7/10.