Player Comments on Ravenpelt's Prophesy

I just want all of you to know that I have explained about this in my profile. Please go check it out if you are confused.

— midnightstars on 3/5/2015 7:32:20 PM with a score of 0

3 words: LONGER LONGER LONGER!!!!????????

— Worrior cats lover on 2/28/2015 6:57:37 AM with a score of 0

Wow, that was good. A little bit of bad grammar, but good story. I'm excited to see the next one!

— Flamepelt43 on 1/31/2015 3:42:22 PM with a score of 0

Snore....

— PegasusFLight on 12/19/2014 3:38:24 PM with a score of 0

Boring...

— Silvermoon on 11/1/2014 3:09:41 PM with a score of 0

I LOVE MAKE MORE!!! plus what did the prophy(yes I know I spelled wrong) mean I am confused

— kelsey on 10/21/2014 9:58:37 PM with a score of 0

I luv it and I will be wating for the next one

— kelsey on 10/14/2014 9:06:17 PM with a score of 0

It wasn't too bad but could of been longer. Also, how would I know to go to the medicine cat when I have only just been born?

— Madbrad200 on 10/11/2014 4:24:38 AM with a score of 0

it was very short and not much to do here .

— damon on 10/10/2014 7:57:49 PM with a score of 0

It was short,and had hardly ANY action in it.I would of rated it a 1/8 if you made the descriptions shorter.And it makes no sense that Lilyfoot(i think that`s her name anyway XD)would get a prophecy and instantly know it is Ravenkit.There could of been a cat in the clan called Sparrowwing who was in the prophecy for all we knew!It was boring,nothing happened in it.

For the next one,if there IS a next one,i suggest you make it much much longer with more action like fights and deaths.

— Winterfrost105 on 10/4/2014 6:04:55 AM with a score of 0

... Please. Stop making these.

— Kiel_Farren on 10/3/2014 2:12:53 PM with a score of 0

Yeah, It's alright, I bet it would happen to me to, Nightsky. Anyway, the rest of the story will be made. I just made this part for people to see if they would want to continue Ravenpelt's story, and this is my first choose your own path story, so I wanted to see what I could improve on.

— midnightstars on 10/2/2014 8:55:14 PM with a score of 0

First of all, sorry, second of all, WHAT JUST HAPPENED??! That was weird…… sorry if you thought I was repeating that. Something happened that caused there to be four of the same comment.

— Nightsky on 10/2/2014 7:32:12 PM with a score of 0

It was good! But where's the rest of the story? It just sort of stops short. What happened to the rest of the story, you know, GROWING UP, and LEARNING IF IT WAS YOU!!! But otherwise, it was a great story!

— Nightsky on 10/2/2014 7:29:18 PM with a score of 0

This was great ^_^
It was really well written! Try to keep the WC storygames from being more than 3 parts though, you should finish the whole story in the next one.
I have a 2 part WC game right now, however, only the first part has been completed. We write similarly, you should play my game sometime.

-fang =)

— 2fangwolf on 10/2/2014 5:44:05 PM with a score of 0

It kinda stopped short .....
but it was enjoyable

— Pineapplekitty on 10/2/2014 8:43:28 AM with a score of 0

FUCKIN WARRIOR CATS. GET. THE. HELL. OFF.

— Malkalack on 10/2/2014 7:03:21 AM with a score of 0

It was fairly well written, in regards to grammar and spelling. I don't feel, however, that you gave us any significant choices. I also wish that you would not serialize your WC games. I prefer it when an author gives me the entire story in one sitting, instead of breaking it into a bunch of tiny pieces. Still, you managed to do better than a lot of previous fanfic writers on this site. 4/8.

— jamescoker1226 on 10/1/2014 10:34:13 PM with a score of 0