Player Comments on Self-Sufficiency Practice

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Okay. I just realized that you made it sneak-peek already. Sorry.

Interesting edutainment “story” where I’m a student in a different school and I have a worksheet/activity to do so I need to develop self-sufficiency skills. It’s a nice little game. Barely a story, barely a world, but a nice little game where I have to navigate a school activity and be self-sufficient.

A problem I have with this story is that you published it, possibly not knowing that publishing a story means releasing it to more than just your target student audience (this is me making assumptions that you made it for your students). Please make it somewhere else or keep it on sneak peek, because now a random stranger from another country is leaving a comment on your storygame and people can leave comments very unsuitable for a classroom. There are other ways to show your students the material without showing people outside your circle the material and subjecting it to… these comments!

Please do more of these, but I recommend making them Sneak-Peek instead of full-on published and making them more fun for your students (like including more games). That will not solve the problem of strangers reading your activity-game, but that will make it harder for them to read the activity-game by forcing them to type in the link themselves.

Whoop!

Usually I point out things like spelling errors, but I didn't see any. Sorry if I missed some. I understand some people make short stories, but this is way too short imo. If you want to post a short story maybe post it in a new thread like I forget who did (not a silly username, I forgot who).

8/8
Thanks for the free point.

Free point yay

Just so the author is aware, if you unpublish this you can put it in Sneak Peek so that it doesn't show up publicly on the site, but it's still accessible to anyone with the link. (It should've been in that mode by default when you created it, but it can set it in Storygame Features too. If it's on then the title and description would show up in your profile when when unpublished.

As it is, any random internet user can leave comments that would be unfit for a classroom, such as what would happen if any of us got into what we REALLY thought of kids who use ChatGPT.